I want to thank everyone for their thoughts and comments so far on my newest story; I really appreciate it. If you have not already, and are so inclined, please give it a read and let me know what you think. I'll be submitting it in a day or two into a contest of beach and summer stories on another website. So far, most readers have commented on a bit of a lack of tension in the story and needing a bit more development of the heroine's personality, which I'm beginning to formulate edits to right now. Any and all feedback is appreciated! Once the story has been edited and completed, I'll post the final version for your enjoyment. Thanks!