For those of you that have already read SES you need to read it again. I have completely rewritten the Prologue and chapter 5. The Prologue had three pages and about 3000+ words added to include a scene I originally only hint about. Chapter 5 got about 10 pages added to it in order to elaborate on Aiko's personality. I've gone through the story 3 times before reposting it so if you find and errors I any have missed send feedback and let me know; especially if it's a character detail I've gotten wrong. I typically keep other chapters open to verify certain details I don't have in my character notes.