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I was looking at my story stats and saw that A Friend's Betrayal had a score of 5.47. I want to ask my readers to review the story and tell me why the story got such a crappy score other than a troll purposely scoring low. Should I rewrite the story? I was thinking about rewriting it but can't really think of anything that would make it better.
I finally got Chapter 4 posted. While reading through it for the last time I had an idea. I will be posting two to three more chapters. Chapter 5 will be about what happens to Lisa after arriving at Marissa's ranch. Chapter 6 will be an alternate ending where Lisa gets the FINO verdict and Thomas goes to prison as well. I'm not sure if there will be a chapter 7, if there is it will be about her life as a FINO ponygirl. I created the first draft of the outline for chapter 6 the alternate ending while I still had the inspiration. I will begin the first draft of the outline for chapter 5 soon. Thank you all for reading my stories.
In all of the years I have been a member and an author of SOL, My Ponygirl Journey Alternate Version is the only story to ever get a score over 8.00. Fourteen votes and a score of 8.65. It is also the only time I have ever gotten a score so high. See, fans, I am getting better. Thank you all for reading my stories and voting.
I was having trouble with this chapter and asked my readers to assist; some came through for me. The final results are Option 1 (free): 0 votes, Option 2 (full-time pony): 4 votes, Option 3 (FINO): 1.
You'll have to wait until I post to see how it turned out.
Current results.
Option 1 (Free): 0
Option 2 (Pony): 3
Option 3 (FINO): 1
Fans are also asking that Lisa get pregnant. I did that in the original version and wasn't planning on doing that in this version but I will have to think about it now.
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