I was taken aback by the number of notes I've received in response to my last post. Of special interest were two suggestions that rather than overwork my muse, I backtrack and rewrite and harmonize "all" of Gordy and Weena ... i.e. everything preceding "University." That's a bit over 1.5 MB.
I'm not sure it will work. It's a decade since I began. But I'd genuinely appreciate input.
