I just wanted to thank everyone who has taken a look at my story. I hope that my amateur mistakes didn't keep you from enjoying one of my life fantasies, lol.
Please feel free to let me know what I can improve on. I would especially like to hear from those who rated me lowly...I am curious if it was the writing or the story itself you didn't care for.
I am thinking about my next story, which revolves around an all nighters in law school with my sexy partner. That story will also be based on a real life situation, but again my fantasy of what I wish would have happened.
I am curio to see if my writing improves with a second try.