Ok, It looks like I have some inconsistencies in Chapter two. I said Aiko had a black centurion card when shopping for funeral dresses. That was before I researched the card. Aiko doesn't actually spend enough to qualify for the invite to be a member, so I said in Chapter 4 I think that she only has a platinum card. I will rectify that and repost. I still have to repost the prologue , which I haven't done yet.
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