I'm posting some newly edited versions of chapters 1-8 today. Most of the changes I've made deal mostly with the atrocious pacing issues throughout the earlier parts of the story.
I've also tried to add more description involving characters.
None of this affects the plot, so if you've read through those chapters already, you're not missing much that's new.
You can expect Chapter 10 on Wednesday the 21st.
- hush