As with everyone, I'm obviously not perfect. Had a typo pointed out to me that I'd missed in not just my initial posting but my follow up edit as well. Sounds like I may need to do more of my editing when it's not before bed time. I fixed the error (chapter 4) and have resubmitted that chapter. I do apologize for any of my errors like that, but hopefully they won't distract too much from the enjoyment you get from the story as a whole.