Over the next day or two I am going to be reposting a good portion of the story's early chapters. For those of you who may not have started reading it, you'll get the benefit of things being a little more cleaned up from continuity or grammatical errors I had initially. The changes aren't going to change the story in any way, just clean it up and make it an easier read. So for those of you who are up to date with the story, you won't be missing anything if you don't go back to re-read, the story will just flow better. In retrospect hopefully this also means that my future chapters will be better as a whole, too. We'll have to see how that goes, though. Hopefully I can do the updates within the next day, then start on chapter 17 after that. I'd like to think they won't take too long, since I'm just tweaking things.