I had it pointed out to me that the sparring match in Chapter 47 of "A Halloween Redemption" couldn't have happened the way it did without someone getting fired. I fixed that by the simple expedience of getting them out to the parking lot.
There were a few people who pointed it out, but 'Wayne' was the one who presented a telling argument for why I should fix it.
Thank you, Wayne.
And thank you all for reading.
