Thanks to everybody who voted. That score was better than I really expected.
You gotta love it! My first comment was from Mr. Lubrican, and was greatly appreciated.
Now, I've received the first ever comments from people who just stopped by to visit:
Great story! Well written.
Right to the point. Thank you. I'm glad the you liked it. :)
It read like honey on bread,cheese on
crackers.complete,nothing extra, just what was
needed to be of good taste. Thank you
Nicely poetic, thank you.
Of course, both comments were anonymous, so this is my reply.
Not even 24 hours, and I've already had to fix it. :}
Thanks to Robert Lubrican for his kind and gentle critique that has helped make this story just that little bit better.
Encouragements joyfully accepted.