New readers might wonder about the discrepancy between chapters 1-20 and the new chapters in view of the spelling, grammar and general readability. It's easy, only the last three chapters were edited by Chipster82, Bigbillh and Scifi Nut, who're actually able to write in English.
At the moment chapters 1-20 are going through a revision as well, but it'll take some more time till it's completed. We decided against re-posting edited chapters successively. Starting with edited chapters and later on struggling with so far unedited chapters would be too disappointing to new readers.
I can't say exactly when the revision will be completed, but I'm hoping it will be finished this month (November 2012). Hope springs ...yadda yadda.
Robberhands