I'm sorry if your hope to find an edited version of the story got smashed once you started reading. Edited by someone actually capable to write in English that is. Basically nothing had changed. I'm still looking for an editor and got no response so far. I just did a more careful proofread of chapter 1-8 myself. While I was on it, I got bored as usual and added 3 more chapters to the "new 1.10" version. So there is sadly no real news. But as they say, hope is eternal!