Just wanted to give a short notice to people who would be interested to read a continuation of Roban's and Athea's story.
First I feel like I should apologize for the poor technicality of the story. But that would be only partly honest. It wont surprise you to hear English isn't my native language. I posted the story partly just to test if people would fight through it, although it was technically poor.
A lot of people did. I'll freely admit I could have done better. My proofreading was more boredom than effort. Why put a lot of work into it, if none would read the story anyway? The voting for the story, especially the detailed TPA ratings, are the information I was hoping for. Most people who read it, did like the story, just not the sloppy use of their language. I hardly can hold that against them, I have to agree.
So I will continue to write, I will even put more effort in proofreading it. Doubtless, those of you who read the story, will be happy to hear I already tried to contact on the site listed editors. So far I got no response. That's the main reason why I can't tell when I'll be able to post the next part. I can imagine it would be a gruesome job for an editor to fight through the horrible mix of English and German grammar, let alone what ever else I messed up. That's, vague as it is, all I can tell at the moment.
Robberhands