Yes tonight is the night its been proffed and now i'm just going back one more time to see if its all right. I have work till 10 pm. Well... part of chapter 8 is done its the next chapter that will tie this all together hopefully...
I'm still looking for some one to bounce ideas off of or an editor to tell me at least what I'm doing wrong, but David still does his wonderful proofing since dyslexia and writing (or even just spelling in my case) have never gotten along.
This new chapter has a few new elements to it and I struggled to hash out the characterization(say that ten times fast). If any of this next chapter dosn't make real sense or is lacking in some way ... please tell me.
... Also i've found the perfect picture for Jill its @ here. yep shes hot.