Okay the Next chapter might take a while, for many reasons but mainly one I'm trying to balance what powers John Solath and Jill have and will have to make it balanced, and for that im using my old psionics book from 2nd edition dnd ... but im realizing psionsist' totally kick mages butts.... so its taking a while for that. also Solath has been organizing her revenge for years against the Razory I want to do that justice in some small way instead of rushing it, so it take some cleaver word play.... with those reasons I have written parts of chapter 5,6,and 7 but none to completion or to what I want them to convey so If your reading this thank you and keep watching the next chapter will come hopefully by this weekend