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June 30, 2012
Posted at 10:47 pm
Updated: June 30, 2012 - 10:48 pm

next chapter comes sunday !!!!

now im struggling with chapter 5, I know what I want to do but im not sure how ... extreme(?) I want to make it. so ill ask is sex one of the driving reasons you the reader are reading? or is the plot engaging enough that you dont need that right now and want the story to progress more with less fluff?

Im a man of few words and people want me to write longer chapters...right now I know this isn't the best story out there like the genie chronicles by... I forgot or accidental commander by tonyG(?)or the more recent missing dragon on literotica. so im trying to take it slow and get a good multifunctional base that will give me the opportunity to do anything I really think is awesome and not burn out and stop updating.

on that note im looking for some one to critique/maybe edit my up coming chapters. I have ideas but no one to bounce them off of and see if I'm missing something... so any ways thanks for reading and as the title says next chapter is done but i need to organize my thoughts on what is comeing next... help in saying yes or no to the question above will do that.