I reposted the story. Readers who have seen it previously and noticed it on the "updates" list and wondered why, this is the reason.
I edited it. I reworked some poor paragraphs, added and removed words that needed it, and fixed my strange grammar. A couple years ago, I had some wrong ideas about writing mechanics, but now I know better. The version now appearing on SOL is much improved over what was up previously, but it's still my writing so that's kinda relative.
I separated the Epilogue from Chapter 6 of HMD and that's why there's 14 parts to the story instead of 13.
Apologies if this confused anyone.
rache
This is a seriously boring blog entry, huh? I shoulda stayed in bed.