Now that my story "Enslaved Couple" is complete, I wanted to ask those who read only the first two chapters and "fled" due to the poor quality of the English, to give it a second chance, since I corrected the errors.
From the evolution of downloads and ratings, and given that I initially published two chapters together, I have the feeling that there were readers who did not read more chapters due to the poor writing. After some suggestions, I revised and published updated the first two chapters and used the same process and tools before publishing each chapter, which, as I have been confirmed, improved quite a lot.
Of course, to anyone who was not interested in the theme or plot, these have not changed.