Reltney McFee: Blog

While I was avoiding writing checks for my bills, laundry, dishes, cooking and so forth, it occurred tome to wonder what it might have been like if someone had witnessed the tryst featured at the state forest campground, in Road Trip Tease. So, I tried to tell that tale from a third person's perspective. I hope that I entertained you, and that I added to the "Road Trip Tease" story, with this effort. A tale I tapped out in a single afternoon. (Wife: unimpressed.)

I have a new story completed. The first chapter is in the queue for posting. I expect that I'll post a chapter a week, for seven chapters. This story starts slowly, as my focus was primarily a sort of thought experiment regarding how I might get home in the event of some sort of catastrophe. I was re reading Lee Goldberg's, "The Walk" (I highly recommend it, as it stands up well to re-reading!), and wondered what sort of event might place me in a parallel circumstance. "Emily in the Dark" is the result of that ruminating. The sex parts are later in the story, but I hope that folks reading on this site will (a) find the rest of the story interesting, and (b) enjoy the intimate encounters. Please, vote and leave feedback! Thank you!

So, I note that another writer on this site (T. S. Fesseln: Go read his stories!) is looking for a proofreader. As might be evident, I proof read, edit, and generally massage my own stories. I do the best that I can, but, in common with every other writer here, I have a life. This life involves a job, spouse, other family, hobbies (other than writing), sleeping, and suchlike. Therefore, I move my scribblings forward with painful slowness.

All of which is to own up to the truth of the re-stated adage, in my case, "A man who is his own proof reader, has typos, misspellings, and word salad as his product".

Because I live a life of idle luxury (as if!), I was scrolling through the site's "greatest hits" lists. To my pleasant surprise, I found "Kathy, Again" as number 22 upon the "Top 50 Completed Top Serials in the Last 30 Days" list.

Thank you to everybody who enjoyed it, and voted accordingly. With regard to those who did not enjoy it, well, thank you for reading. Please consider yourselves invited to comment, letting me know what you did or did not like about this, or any other story I've submitted.

I was considering how "Kathy Again" ended, and wondered how else the kids (young adults) could have been introduced to bondage and anal. I have submitted an alternate last chapter for the story, and it awaits moderation and posting. This is a kinky tangent to my usual, but, well, let me know how well it works. Thanks for reading!

It appears that I'll have o submit "Chapter 9 Bravo" as "chapter 10". Stay tuned! Thank you!