Resubmitted both chapters. Chapter 2 had the first person part moved back to chapter 1 where it belongs. There's also about 2,100 new words that I missed copying before. It's hard to think clearly at times.
As usual, I messed up
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I must have copy and pasted the wrong bits when I submitted stuff. Going to fix up the chapters if I can. I'll try and check in when I'm able to, which is not often.
