Lee Xavier: Blog

Hello, I'm a bit ahead of schedule so I'm posting a bit early. I've gotten some awesome feedback and a few ideas from readers that will be making their way into the story. Keep up the good work.

In this chapter John finds himself in some very serious shit. I hope you enjoy it. Keep up the feedback.

I'm also looking for an editor. I'm wanting a bonifide grammar nazi to help me keep those damn commas straight. I'm also looking to eliminate passive sentences from my writing. If you fit the bill and are interested let me know. Thanks.
TKR

Hello everyone,
Chapter 11 is up. I hope you enjoy it. In other news, right at 1/3 of my readers absolutely hated the flash story "Last Words". That's fine. I would ask that if you are going to rate one of my pieces a one that you drop me a line. I can't get better if I don't know what I'm doing wrong. As always,feedback ( constructive criticism included) is welcome.

TKR

Just for fun, I posted a flash story. Let me know what you think. In other news, I am working on the next installment of HIMS. I'm hoping to have it up this weekend. As always, feed back is always welcome.

TKR

Hello Everyone,
Chapter 10 is in. It contains the first sex scene of the story. I would really like to receive some feedback and constructive criticism on this chapter. What did I do right? What did I do wrong? Too coarse, too mechanical? I am aiming to create a story worth reading. What corrections would you make as a writer? Let me know.
Thanks again for reading.

TKR

I've posted Chap 9. John's getting ready for his first training assignment for HIMS. A problem springs up, I wonder what it could be? As always feedback is appreciated.

TKR