Lee Xavier: Blog

Chapter 15 is submitted.
As always, Feedback is greatly appreciated.

TKR

Hey Everyone,

Just to let you know, I'm reviewing the earlier chapters of HIMS and cleaning them up a bit.

TKR

Hello,

I've been having a lot of fun writing this story. There's been much to learn. Plotting, punctuation, grammar, and characterization to name a few.

One of the funnest lesson's I've learned is that my job as an author is to make my protagonist's life a living hell. To add drama by finding ways to sink the knife in deeper and twist it just a little more. All of this, just to entertain us. How cool's that?

In this chapter, new characters are introduced with a surprising little twist.

From the beginning of this story I have stated that it is an exploration of purposeful evil. What it is and how a person's choices affect them and those around them. I have also tried to respect my reader's sensibilities by pointing this out so that they could avoid the story if they feel it may be offensive to them.

So far in the story, John has sold his soul, targeted a marriage and destroyed it, impregnated the wife, driven the husband to suicide, and framed an innocent person in the process as a training exercise. The family was chosen for no other reason than they were convenient for the purpose and John liked the wife's body.

From this point forward, we are going even deeper into the darkness. More people will die and lives will be crushed. Come. If you are willing.

I would like to thank my editor's for their hard work. As always, feedback is appreciated.

TKR

Chapter 13 is hot off the press. We have a new editorial team in place so the story should be that much better.
As always, Feed back is appreciated.
TKR

Earlier today I asked for a volunteer editor and the response has been overwhelming. I have picked the ones I wish to work with. I want to thank each and everyone of you who volunteered for your generous offers.

TKR