Thank you all for your comments.
I have had a number of people comment that even though the story was good, it would have been better if I had filled some of the gaps with missions and that chapter 2 seemed almost disconnected from chapter 3.
You know something I believe you may be right. Comments like that are appreciated. I do want to learn to improve my writing style. I will keep this story in my active/needs work folder and if I can come up with improvements, I will do them. If I can come up with a smoother whole I will repost the story.
Again I do appreciate comments if they are offered in a constructive manner.
Thank You
Holdred
Hi all,
In answer to the question will I finish Watched. The answer is yes.
When I first started Watched I had never set down anything. Now I have Six stories in progress.
This new one is finished. Most of the others I will finish before I start posting them So I can Give my readers assurance that they are starting a story that will be finished.
This One The reluctant assassin almost wrote itself now ten days and 15000 words later I sent it to my editor. It is back now and I am posting it. Give it a read. I hope you like it.
Holdred
No I am still working on it.
I try to spend some time writing every day. However it isn't all on Watched. I have three stories with a significant amount in them. I am holding off putting any of the other two up.
I would really like to have them either finished or almost finished before I start posting.
The muse for Watched has taken a holiday. I have really tried to add significantly to it but I am having trouble. Yes I still plan on finished it.
I hope you all have a nice day.
Holdred
I warned people that I was putting the stories up unedited. Thank you for catching them. If people remain as nice about there comments i will try to get them fixed when I have a batch of them to do.
Thanks!
Holdred