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A reader found comma slice heaven in these two chapters and graciously fixed them for us. Also, Erik graciously pointed out other technical errors which once corrected will make these chapters flow better. I am so appreciative of this type of help.
You wouldn't believe how much better the story became because of Mr. Wolf and NancyRX. Now Erik is helping me with things like names ending in "s" like Palus. I should of used Palus's but have been using Palus'.
Thanks for putting up with the technical issues.
Edits are back from Mr. Wolf and I will review them tonight for release tomorrow.
Thanks again for all the e-mails, they help motivate me to stay at my word processor.
Mr. Wolf has worked his magic and finished editing three more chapters. Thank you.
If anyone finds a random spelling error or missing word please contact me so I can repair the offending item to improve the work for future readers. Three people review the chapters but we just miss things.
Yes, I use UK spelling at times which are intended. My heritage leaks out at times.
Since this is a holiday weekend I do not expect to see any edits or uploads until next week. I would like to thank those readers that regularly take time to point out spelling error so others will benefit from my revisions.
It seems people want Von dead or under their control. A high tech healing system does help but a sword and cross bow wound would put almost anyone into shock.
Chapter 11 submitted to SOL. My hard working editor has chapter 12 and 13. He has a life so we need to be patient.
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