hi sorry I've been off the grid for a while. but that's life and all you writers know about muses.
now to answer some feedback from the latest chapters.
to the anon who asked is my little town full of pedo's and murders, have you ever lived in a small town in the grip of some big time crims, better get out from under that rock and take a look, the world mostly the US is a corrupt and dangerous place just look at the court and law system.
and last Roberts question of.
Excellent start. More have his genes then we
thought. Now we have more telepaths also.
Must run in the family.
if you read the early chapters they say that the genes are in all of us and for most of them they lay dormant but for a few those genes are active, now I could add more but that would almost be spoilers.
ps has anyone noticed my choice of names for the secondary characters, here's a hint marvel fans should notice with the new girls names in chapter 7.
Hello there faithful readers i just thought you could use an update.
on the genesis story I'm sat to say that my muse has dictated that i take a break from that and work on a new story, which is coming along nicely.
And because of all the trouble Ive had with pc's of late im writing this on on paper first before i type it up, and i wont start doing that until i reach chapter 10.
hi all as you may have guessed i have been having some troubles but i wont bore you.
im just here to say there are 2 chapters of genesis ready but my editor seem to have disappeared and hasn't got back to me so im in need of another, so anyone who thinks they can straighten out my train wreck of thoughts email me.
ok folks i have just updated chapter 1 so have at it
hello again just thought I'd clear up a few things that some people are still having problems with, but the good news there is not as many as last time.
1. for the people that have problems with selling and grammar there are a few differences between Australian and US English and im Australian, and i don't really care about scores. i just simply want to tell the story thats in my head and i thought i would share it with the world.
and sirgeek is currently re-editing the first 3 chapters so be patient.
and i change perspective when i think its needed when you see this ______________________________ it means the perspective and or location has changed.
chapter 5 is still in progress but it is a bit stop/start at the moment.