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Book 4 conclusion

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I hope you all enjoyed book four, book five is almost ready. Thank you for your vote in confidence, even the naysayers, I appreciate you. After all what is good art, without criticism! Steven has edited the absolute shit out of this, and without his help this would not be as polished.

Book 4 Magic

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Book Four, Magic, is coming to a close. One more chapter to go. We've already started work on book five, which will be fun.

For the tourney, I wanted to go with the Game of Thrones route, but Steven didn't like that 😂 With regards to the tourney, I've done a lot of work on this—not just watched A Knight of the Seven Kingdoms. This required actual research. For example, did you know that when a knight falls, people scramble for his armour? That costs a lot of money and can make people rich! Today I learned!

As always, thank you for your patience and criticism. I always appreciate it.

Thank you to all the new readers, thank you to all the returning readers. I'm still mind blown at the download rate. I think this might my biggest story to date. And don't worry, I have no intentions of subverting expectations. I think you'll like how this ends. (Glares at Eric Kripke, fucker).

Chapter 37 Convergence

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Chapter has been put in the queue — enjoy!

I'm still completely mind-blown by the sheer volume of downloads... I'm really glad you guys are loving it. As always, a huge thanks to my editor, who puts so much time and effort into helping me polish these chapters.

Three more to go and this part will be finished.

An observation

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There seems to be an influx of stories coming in, as duly noted from the notifications. I've noticed an increase in Isekai tales, which I'm pleased to see. They're essentially "Do Overs" but with magic. One thing that's actually been bothering me with a lot of the new stories is the synopsis. They're supposed to give you a clear idea of what the story is about and what it may entail. Sadly, a preponderance of them fail at this—they're vague and confusing. Is it about aliens, monsters, magic, a do-over, or incest? I have no idea, and that ambiguity is really annoying.

Chapter 33 in the queue

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Sorry for the long delay—it's been a bank holiday weekend and I got a bit knackered. Washing up for 200 people a day is busy work. People downvoted me after my last comment, so that's the last time I comment about AI. I welcome all forms of constructive criticism: if you spot any errors that Steven or I have missed, please, please feel free to let me know. Spot any major plot holes too! I'm open to talking about it. If you want to insult me, please don't—I have no time or interest in getting into arguements, I'm to fat and to old to be interested in it. I enjoy writing this, and yes, I use the term "writing." James is one of my favourite characters, and I know I use the name a lot; it's just one of those names I really like. Having said that, the score did dip after my rant but has since bumped back up, so thank you to whoever helped with that—I really appreciate it!

That said, we are working on the next part! I hope you're all still enjoying the story. Again, wanna chat, feel free to email me! Or leave comment...

 

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