I have a good news and bad news scenario here, the problem is that you lot are going to hate me, I don’t want to see any of you at my door with pitchforks and the like.
Good news, I’m really pleased with the positive responses I’ve received over the last couple of days, especially after my *cough* Temper Tantrum *cough* on my blog the other day. This means that I will be continuing Objects in Motion.
Now… the bad news. I’m doing a rewrite, yes, I’m well known for that, but, I have a friend. One of the editors of A Fresh Start (love it!) has contacted me and offered his services. He’s made a load of suggestions and had me scratching my head at others, fear not, he’s a pervert like me, so it’s all good. He will help me rewrite my story, my other lovely editors will still be on the team, as the old saying goes, more hands make light work.
Wires – is my Oregon guy, he’s the one helping me set everything up
Nnpdad – is my grammar guy, he’s the one teaching me all this shit and has improved everything greatly
Proxy – is my plot developer, he will help me in a massive capacity, i.e. plot, school, drive, et cetera.
Expect good things!
See you on the flip side.
Okay, admittedly, asking people to tank someones score was a bit cuntish, but then so is calling someone what she called me.
Don't tank her scores, hell, go to her stories and give her the best goddamned score on the website :D
I recently asked another author on this site for some help with Objects in Motion, it was for the college years, I figured as this author is writing stories set in college, she would be able to help. But, instead, no I got a snotty response that really upset me. I’ve put a block on her shit, and I would advise others doing the same.
The author is BIC, who has taken voting off her work, because the score barely reaches over six percent. Normally I would not be so pissed, if an author can’t help, that’s cool I understand, we all have a life out of porn, well except me apparently.
“Sorry I can't help. The only advice I can give is have your character grow up and stop reading comic books”
What the fuck?
The character in the book does not read comics, is highly intelligent and actually has a life and multiple girlfriends. Had you read the story, you would’ve known that. I suggest, before you make such stupid comments, you research the story in question first.
FYI – my score is 6.73, which is actually higher than any of your stories. So I can only assume that comment, was aimed directly at me.
You know nothing about me, you know nothing about my life so how you can make such a fucking response is ridiculous. If I was the only one on this site, writing porn, sci-fi or otherwise, I would fully understand such a stupid comment, but I am not. There are thousands of writers on here and I am disgusted that someone would answer with such an inconsiderate response, considering, having looked at one of the stories, it is based around a teacher giving a lesson on spanking…
Really? And I’m the one that needs to get a life?
At least I’m trying to improve my scores by improving my writing skills, the author of fifty shades of gray, who was a lonely housewife and had no sex life, made millions from reading comic style books and ripping them off.
Hope your pleased with yourself love, hope that comment makes you happy, and I hope, the thousands of viewers who hit my blog daily and read my stories, drop your score like a rock in a lake, right to the bottom.
This story is at warp factor five, and ya know what? I enjoy star wars, I enjoy star trek, I enjoy stargate, hell I LOVE comics, video games and all that shit, and ya know what? I ain’t alone in that, we nerds are thousands in the making, I suggest you watch a comic cons youtube video day and see just how many people go there.
Looking for anyone who knows about archery, writing it, doing it, learning it.
Exactly what it says, Saturday he's watched the News, anything interesting you could think of for putting in?