I have to admit that I have never thought of writing a story. I received an invitation from chilleywilley to write something in the summer of 2012 and others also wrote me to encourage me to write something. I had some free time so I wrote 5 rough story outlines. However, I am a revenge story fan, so my first 5 stories were revenge stories. This story is my first one. I wrote a first version and I rewrote it and my second version reached my editor BTTap. Thanks for his excellent work. The rough story was the first in my life. I am an apprentice to become Author. BTTap edited and polished my rough text for English-speaking readers, so they can thank him for the readable prose and many good changes made in my original. I put a little or more ANR almost in all my stories like SS06 puts in Ford Mustang. I discovered the world's most secret sex practice, ANR, sex on the Net. ANR is the Adult Breastfeeding or Adult Nursing Relationship which 99% of ANR pairs hide from the world. It may be the most monogamous sex practice, but the most hidden sex practice as well. I have deep sympathy for the practitioners of ANR, because I prefer lowfat milk to beer. Some marriage counsellors began recommend it for married couples as Ann and Jim in the story, because ANR is said to glue the pairs so firmly together as concrete does gravel. Readers can get information about ANR at: http://www.lovelait.info/Packages.html
A Classical Revenge Story with the "mandatory" 4 parts, as
1. The past of the couple, 2. The discovery of cheating, 3. The main (cruel) revenge part, 4. Panoramic epilogue with romantic revenge situations. Here are 4 romantic revenge situations. In the story there are 2 modern Figaro type revenge situations as well. Like a puzzle magazine, I ask my readers to find the 7 (seven) revenge weapons in the story. The benefit is good entertainment.
A little "revengeology" for ignorant to find the 7 revenge weapons: What are the three types of revenge weapons?
1. Cruel Revenge is when the aims of the revenge become physical, psychical cruelty treatment through Revenge. For example STDs, other illnesses, baseball treatment, to treat with paint, chemical materials, threatening with danger, using electric shock instruments, etc.
2. Romantic Revenge, when the betrayed ex spouse lives in much greater happiness, and the cheater ex spouse knows it.
3. Modern Figaro Type Revenge, when the betrayed spouse or her/his friend(s) organize such tricks which result in better (financial, child custody, other) conditions for the betrayed spouse after/during the divorce.
After more than two years the Hungarian translator of Irwin Shaw's novel "The Young Lions" helped me for an end edition.