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Building a Better Past

Copyright© 2009 by tendertouch

Foreword

First I'd like to thank my editor, Lincoln_Imp, for his assistance. I do some editing, too, but I wasn't very surprised to find that my own story was riddled with errors. I have another editor as well but I haven't gotten the edited version back from him yet. When I do I'll update the story as published.

I'd also like to thank Janna Leonard and JimWar. They were willing to take the time to read early drafts of this story and let me know if it was worth finishing. Janna, in particular, provided some good feedback that helped to improve the story.

This is my first attempt at writing fiction that has gotten past the first chapter. As such I fully expect that it could stand some improvement. Please send comments — both good and bad — as they're the best way I can see to improve my writing. In particular constructive comments (e.g. scene <x> would have been better if you'd done <y> because... ) are greatly appreciated!

 
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