The Murder of Mrs. Nimsdorf
by Heel
Copyright© 2025 by Heel
Fiction Story: When a hammer comes into play, choices and consequences take a dark turn.
Caution: This Fiction Story contains strong sexual content, including Heterosexual Fiction Crime Horror BDSM Humiliation Light Bond Sadistic Torture Body Modification Doctor/Nurse Foot Fetish Leg Fetish Revenge .
The weather turned bad at noon, just when the carpenter Ronald had decided to kill Mrs. Nimsdorf. The rain was light, and they didn’t take umbrellas. They set out along the stony path leading to the top of the hill. They didn’t talk, both sunk in their gloomy thoughts. After her husband’s death, Anneke Nimsdorf had fallen into depression and had repeatedly declared publicly that she didn’t want to live anymore. So Ronald didn’t feel particularly guilty that he was about to take her life.
A rotten bench had to be removed. For some unknown reason, the lady had insisted on accompanying Ronald. Otherwise, the two rarely spoke. The difference in their social status was too great. He did his carpentry work conscientiously, and she paid him well and on time. On the surface, everything between them seemed fine.
Anneke looked good in her simple green dress. Her thin waist was tightened with a wide leather belt. Her dark-blond, slightly reddish hair was braided and swayed like a pendulum with every step. Her wooden shoes tapped against the stones in a dull rhythm. Her sweet, freckled face, as usual lately, radiated immense boredom. She could not get over the loss of her husband, who had died before his time from tuberculosis.
The carpenter didn’t harbor ill feelings toward her and even found her physically attractive, but that didn’t lessen his determination to kill her.
A few years earlier, he had taken a loan from Mr. Nimsdorf in order to build himself a workshop. Unfortunately, however, the workshop had burned down in a fire, and he hadn’t managed to repay the loan. The death of Nimsdorf had given him hope that he wouldn’t have to pay, especially since Anneke apparently wasn’t aware of her husband’s business affairs, but ... a lawyer had muddied the waters. The bastard had urged her to dig into her husband’s documents. That meant there was a great danger the loan would come to light.
The plan was to hit her on the back of the head with the hammer, then roll her body down the slope. Everyone would think she had committed suicide. The chance that anyone might witness the murder was practically zero, because this land belonged to Anneke and no one ever set foot there. Well, someone might see him on the way out, but ... who would pay attention to that? After all, he often came to do repairs in the Nimsdorfs’ house.
Ronald wasn’t a malicious man — he was simply rough and practical by nature, and he had no fear of God because of the countless disappointments that had marked his life. He didn’t think it was such a great crime to kill a person who didn’t want to live anyway. At the same time, he did feel a little sorry for Anneke, who had always treated him kindly. This murder was predetermined by circumstance; it was a job that had to be done conscientiously. After all, she was a human being ... not an animal prepared for slaughter.
Anneke stopped by the rotten bench and touched it with her hand. Then she looked into the distance, where the river Drees peered out with its dark-blue waters through a veil of fine mist. The view was gloomy and somehow ominously majestic.
Ronald took the hammer out of the box and weighed it in his hand. A fine tool, which had served him faithfully for more than five years. Here was the right moment ... Arms crossed on her chest, she was gazing at the horizon and, naturally, had no idea that someone meant her harm. The carpenter told himself that what’s bad for one person is good for another — and swung the hammer...
At that moment, Anneke slightly bent her head, startled by a lizard that rustled in the nearby bushes. Instead of the back of her head, the hammer struck her neck. A sharp cracking sound was heard. Anneke screamed and collapsed like a blade of grass cut by a scythe. She fell on her back and froze for a moment, then began to kick with her right leg. Her eyelids were closed, but it was obvious that her eyeballs underneath were spinning uncontrollably. Her mouth gaped open in a soundless scream.
Ronald raised the hammer to strike again, but changed his mind. He was trembling; he didn’t have the strength to finish her off. He threw the hammer away angrily. He hadn’t expected that killing someone would be so difficult. He had thought everything through ... had prepared himself mentally ... but one small movement had ruined everything. She hadn’t received the deadly blow she deserved. Still, he silently prayed that she would die — quietly, if possible. Because that kicking of her leg was tearing his nerves apart ... Suddenly she opened her eyes wide. They looked surprised and frightened. Ronald was pacing nervously; wanted to run away. For the first time in his life, he felt like a complete idiot.
“What happened?” she asked, running a trembling hand across her forehead.
Ronald lowered his head guiltily and said nothing.
“What happened, Ronald?” she insisted.
“Don’t you know?”
“No.”
“Well ... it seems you slipped and fell.”
“I don’t remember. I was looking into the distance, and suddenly the sky darkened and my head hurt terribly.”
“You slipped and fell, madam. You hit your head.”
“That’s all I needed ... It hurts! Please, help me, Ronald. I think I’m ... dying.”
“Oh! Don’t move! You mustn’t move!”
“I ... something’s wrong with my legs.”
“Calm down, everything will be fine, Mrs. Nimsdorf.”
She groaned and closed her eyes. Her face was deathly pale.
The carpenter had already abandoned his diabolical intentions. For some unknown reason, his thoughts were entirely focused on how to help her. He was glad that she hadn’t realized he had tried to kill her.
Anneke cried, then wet herself, then made a desperate attempt to lift herself on her elbows. But her body didn’t obey. Her head was fixed, twisted to one side in a frighteningly unnatural way. The kicking of her right leg gradually subsided.
After picking up his hammer, Ronald lifted the injured woman, supporting her twisted, already swollen and bluish neck with his palm. Anneke couldn’t bear being moved — she let out a scream, then rolled her eyes back and fainted. He carried her to the house and laid her on the bed in the large bedroom. Then he mounted his horse and set off to find a doctor. He felt he was doing the right thing, but at the same time the guilt was crushing him. He told himself he deserved to rot in prison. Still, when he came back, he took Anneke’s keys and opened her safe. He felt enormous relief as he burned the documents concerning the loan.
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