Not Quite a Fair Fight
Copyright© 2023 by LolaPaul
Prelude
Crashing the Aztex Party In The Yucatan
Note the POV, each chapter contains the observations of Irene or Tony. As the commander of the operation, Irene must report on the general course of events to the Prince. As the lowest-ranked trooper involved, Tony’s perspective reflect what he sees. The Prince is not “on camera” in this, for most of the operation he is at the resort for the law firm’s extended Labor Day social, keeping folks happy.
The story is nominated as “Non-Erotic.” There are naked men and women involved, but outside of the principals who retain an appropriate attitude there is only incidental reference to how they might be making friendly contact.
Torture and lethal actions will occur, but the story will not dwell on these. The purpose is simply to show how a substantial threat to the Prince’s people was neutralized.
I suggest that the chapters with Tony’s viewpoint (1, 5, 7, 11, and 13) will be the most interesting.
Chapter 1. Tony Comes In - Tony’s View of the Aztex plan. (Tony)
Chapter 2. Recon Off Yucatan - Success in battle requires a plan, and a plan requires gathering information before the troops depart. (Irene)
Chapter 3. Mayan Contact - The good guys get lucky and save a Mayan from becoming fish bait because of his young love. (Irene)
Chapter 4. Tuska Sails - Events during the voyage and after arrival. (Irene)
Chapter 5. A Close Look - Going over the latest maps for the changes. (Tony)
Chapter 6. Flex The Plans - Adjusting the plan for the new maps and making a path while the Aztex poison gang does their thing. (Irene)
Chapter 7. Blue Encounter - Boots on the ground as Tony returns, and something critical comes out of the Blue. (Tony)
Chapter 8. New Wrinkle - One new fact leads to a critical change. (Irene)
Chapter 9. Events Of The Week - The lull before the storm as both sides move forward with plans. Cameras, mikes and drones put us there. (Irene)
Chapter 10. Sunday Night Command View - Special Force Tony opens the doors and contacts the package. (Irene)
Chapter 11. Escape - “I have food ... and a blessed jeep...” (Tony)
Chapter 12. Onion Bun - How do you say “rain steel and fire” in Aztex? (Irene)
Chapter 13. Adios Mexico - We exit via Zodiac. “ ... this sea is trackless...” and “Tropic Maria” gets us to Belize. (Tony)
Chapter 14. Reports Of Ops - Reports sent to the Prince during operations. (Irene)
Chapter 15. The Morning After - Cleanup, collect, and survivors including whores. (Irene)
Chapter 16. Politics - Mexico and the Church each manage the aftermath. (Irene)
Chapter 17. Closing The Books - Later details. (Irene)
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