Champion of the Ages
Copyright© 2026 by SummitMan
Chapter 18
The next ten days went very fast.
Frances had learned, over a year in the pockets and sixteen years before that in a house in Ann Arbor, that the trick to getting a great deal done was not to do it all yourself. And so, for perhaps the first time in her adult life, she didn’t.
She had handed the design of the new weapons and the whole business of mass production to Haldor, and Haldor had taken hold of it with both of his enormous soot-stained hands. She had handed the testing of weapons and tactics to Prince Corin, who was in and out of the Training Pocket with Sir Ulric’s knights and Bram’s spearmen so often that the guardsman at the archway had stopped saluting him every time he passed. The drek collar was out in Wat’s fields. The spinning wheel was taking shape in Leofric’s workshop.
And she had a plan for her archery.
She went back to the beginning.
This time she did it properly, the way she had done the swordwork. Giovanni stood outside the Training Pocket’s archway, ready to mend her each time she came out. Marguerite kept the Study Pocket stocked with food, and Frances slept there between sessions, in Lucien’s borrowed childhood bedroom. Within a few cycles the three of them had found their rhythm again, and the machine began to run.
She trained. She went out to Giovanni. She ate and slept. She trained again.
The Dark Knight tutor never tired and never let anything pass. It moved her from the forty-pound bow to fifty, and then to sixty, and finally to a heavy war bow of seventy-five pounds. Each time, her form fell apart and had to be rebuilt. Each time, her shoulders and back and fingers screamed for a week, and Giovanni mended them, and they came back stronger. Her arrows began to cluster at a hundred feet, then at two hundred. Then the tutor set out a great marked oval on the grass at four hundred feet, the size of a body of men, and taught her to drop arrows into it in a high, falling arc, again and again and again, until her body knew the angle without her having to think about it.
But a drawing arm could only take so much in a day, so she cross-trained. When her arm began to tire and her arrows began to wander, she did not stop. She asked the Pocket for mail and a kite shield instead, and went back to fighting Dark Knights until her shoulders had recovered enough to draw again.
And every so often, she asked the Pocket to put a bill into her hands and teach her to use it: the thrust, the hook, the drag, the short, brutal work of the back spike. Just in case, she thought, remembering the Baron’s thin smile. But you might wish to practice a little.
It was during one of those stretches in armor that a thought struck her, and she lowered her shield.
“Pocket,” she said. “The knights who’ve trained in here over the years. Do you remember them? How they fought?”
The Dark Knight in front of her stopped mid-stride and stood still.
“Affirmative. I hold a clear model of the capability of every warrior who has fought within this pocket. Any of them may be fielded.”
Frances felt a slow smile spread across her face. “Then I’d like to fight the best of them. The finest knights of the Ringholders. The finest of the inner baronies. Whoever you judge strongest.”
“Acknowledged.”
So she fought them, one after another, across many sessions. There were champions of Highcrag and Stonegate, and knights of the interior who had come to Ironwatch in their youth to be broken and remade. They were men whose names meant nothing to her yet, but some of them would almost certainly be sitting at tables in Aldricspire. Some were strong. Some were quick. A few were genuinely clever.
None of them was anything like Sir Gareth the Unbroken.
It was not even close. She had expected the best knights in the realm to push her, the way the Dark Knights had pushed her for a year. Instead she found herself defending with something close to ease. Again and again she saw an attack coming long before it arrived: the cut gathering in a shoulder, the bash building in a hip, the feint that was so obviously a feint. Her shield was where it needed to be before the blow had properly begun.
After a while, it began to bother her.
She held up her hand, and the knight in front of her stopped.
“Pocket. Why are these men so poorly trained? Every one of them is telegraphing his attacks. I can see each move coming a mile off.”
There was the briefest pause.
“The knights are not telegraphing their attacks. Their models are accurate. I have analyzed your defenses, and I now conclude that you are using Foresight to react to attacks precisely the moment preparations to attack begin.”
Frances stood very still.
“In retrospect,” the flat voice went on, “it is clear that you did this against Sir Gareth the Unbroken. Your shield was in position too quickly for normal human reaction time.”
She thought of the courtyard. The canted shield, already waiting when Gareth’s first cut came down. The low cut at her knee, and her leg already lifting out of its path. She had put all of it down to a year of Dark Knights, to reading weight and shoulder and hip. She had told herself it was instinct: a fraction of a second’s warning, built from thousands of deaths.
Perhaps it had never been instinct at all.
“Are you telling me,” she said slowly, “that I’m an Oracle?”
“To some small degree. It is certainly clear that you use Foresight as part of your defenses. I recommend honing this ability. To do so, you would need to consult the appropriate mages.”
Magnus, she thought at once. And then, just as quickly: not yet. Magnus would want to study it properly, test it and write it all down, and there was no time for that before Aldricspire. She filed it away carefully, at the very top of the list for her return to Ironwatch.
The knight stood waiting. The grey forest was quiet. Something rose in her chest that she had not felt in a very long time. It wasn’t satisfaction, or relief, or the cool pleasure of a plan coming together. It was glee: pure, ridiculous, ten-years-old-on-Christmas-morning glee.
I’m a mage, she thought. I’m a mage!
That has got to be the coolest thing ever.
She laughed out loud, alone in a forest that did not exist, and the faceless knight waited patiently for her to finish. Then she raised her shield again.
By the time she stopped, she had spent well over six months of subjective time in the two pockets. Outside, barely a day had passed.
On her last visit to Giovanni, she asked him the question that had been nagging at her.
“The endurance,” she said, as he worked on her shoulders. “The thing we built in the thin air. I haven’t been doing altitude training. I’ve only been training in ordinary air. But my endurance never seemed to leave me, and neither did my strength. How long will they last?”
Giovanni frowned, and took her hand in both of his, and went looking. He was quiet for a long time. When he finally let go, he was smiling, a slow, puzzled, delighted smile.
“I had expected both to fade, my lady, unless you kept up the proper training,” he said. “A body made for thin air should, in time, forget it, once it lives in thick air again. That is what the old accounts of the Rathmere expeditions suggest. But I see no sign of it fading in you. None at all. And your strength is as it was.” He shook his head. “It may be that the workings, laid on you so many times over, have fixed these changes in your body for good. Whatever we built in you, it seems to have stayed built. I shall have to add a page to the codex.”
When she came out of the pocket for the last time, Frances went to find Aldo Fletcher.
He was at the butts beyond the north wall, drilling a line of his archers at two hundred feet. When she asked him to help her test her shooting, he looked at her with polite bewilderment. It was clear that he had no idea she could shoot at all, and was trying to think how to tell the Commander kindly that archery was harder than it looked.
“Set out three targets for me, please,” Frances said. “A big marked oval on the ground at four hundred feet. Twenty feet wide, the size of a group of men. A standing target at three hundred feet. And another at two hundred.”
Aldo did as she asked, still looking puzzled.
Frances took the heavy self bow Wulfstan had made for her, his first full-sized prototype, seventy-five pounds, nearly as tall as she was. She counted out thirty war arrows and stuck them point-down in the turf beside her, in a neat row within easy reach. Then she turned to Aldo.
“I’m going to shoot continuously,” she said. “Ten arrows at the farthest target, then ten at three hundred, then ten at two hundred. One arrow every ten seconds. No stopping between targets. Tell me what you think when I’m done.”
Then she began.
She shot at the long target first, high and steady, the arrows rising in a long arc and falling toward the oval four hundred feet away. Ten seconds. Draw, anchor, loose. Ten seconds. Draw, anchor, loose. Ten arrows. Then, without pausing, she lowered her aim and turned to the target at three hundred feet. Ten more. Then the target at two hundred. Ten more.
Five minutes. Thirty arrows.
When she lowered the bow, her breathing was barely quickened, and her arms were steady.
They walked down the range together and counted. More than half of her long volleys had fallen inside the twenty-foot oval at four hundred feet. About half her arrows had struck the target at three hundred. And at two hundred feet, eight of her ten arrows were grouped tightly near the center. The last one, the thirtieth, was very nearly in the middle of it.
Frances was reasonably pleased.
Aldo Fletcher was not reasonably anything. He stood in front of the target at two hundred feet with his mouth slightly open, staring at the thirtieth arrow. He had not known she was an archer at all. And here she was, shooting as well as any archer he commanded. More than that, she was shooting that well at the end of five minutes of constantly shooting war arrows with a heavy bow, when even his best men would have been shaking.
“My lady Commander,” he said at last. His voice was not quite steady. “Your shooting is as good as the very best of my archers. As good, or better.” He shook his head slowly. “And I do not know that any of them could strike a mark so well with the thirtieth arrow. Not after five minutes. Not with a bow so heavy.”
Frances nodded.
“Then here’s what I’d like,” she said. “Work with Prince Corin, and with Giovanni. Prince Corin will arrange the training with you. By the time I come back from Aldricspire, I want every one of your archers to shoot better than I just did.”
A month ago, Aldo Fletcher would have told her it was impossible. Now he looked at her, and at the thirtieth arrow, and simply nodded.
“It will be so, my lady,” he said.
She spent the following days tying off loose ends, one after another.
She sat with Haldor and Osric in the forge and worked through the jigs and templates for war arrows: shafts cut to a length stick and passed through a ring gauge, nocks cut in a jig, feathers set in a second jig, and arrowheads forged to a single socket size so that any head would fit any shaft. Osric argued with her about the feathers for the better part of an hour, and then went away and came back the next morning with a jig of his own design that was better than the one she had sketched. She did the same with Tam for the spears and the bill: one length of shaft, one size of socket, one pattern of head, so that any head would fit any shaft in any barony in Valdoria.
She sat with Osbert and Leofric, and with Edmund, and finished the patents.
The numbers on the drek collar had come back from Wat by then, and they were better than she had dared hope. Wat and Osbert had loaded a cart with stones, a little more each time, first in the old harness and then in the collar. The drek could pull a much heavier load in the collar than in the harness. And it no longer grew angry and needed to stop for a bell to calm down after every bell or two of work. When they had put the two together, Wat swore by every god he could name that his drek was doing two and a half days’ work in a single day.
Two and a half times. Frances made Wat say it three times, and then wrote it down herself.
The spinning wheel was finished too. Leofric had delivered it to Aldwin the weaver, and Aldwin had come up to the castle the next evening almost incoherent with joy. His wife and his sister had spent the day at it, and between them, he said, they had spun nearly twice the thread in a day that they had ever spun before. Nearly twice. And they were only just learning.
Edmund, it turned out, knew exactly how a petition for letters patent should be set out. He had copied enough of them over the years for the library’s own records. With his help, both patents were drawn up on fresh parchment, with drawings and measurements, in a fair copy for the Patent Rolls.
When it came to the names, Frances shook her head.
“Not mine,” she said. “Put them in your own names. Osbert for the collar. Leofric for the wheel.”
Osbert stared at her. “My lady, the design is yours. The idea is yours. The patent should rightly bear your name.”
“I won’t be here, Osbert,” Frances said gently. “In a few years I’ll go home, and I’ll never come back. A patent in my name does nobody any good once I’m gone. You’ll be here, and so will your children.” She smiled. “All I ask is this. While I’m still in Valdoria, give me half of your share of the licence fees. After that, it’s all yours.”
Osbert and Leofric looked at each other. Frances watched them understand, slowly and then all at once, how many collars and how many spinning wheels a kingdom of four hundred thousand households might want, at one part in twenty of every sale.
“Agreed, my lady,” Leofric said. His voice was not quite steady either. “Gladly agreed.”
One morning, Aldo and Haldor came to find her together, carrying something folded over Haldor’s arm. They were both wearing the faintly sheepish, faintly triumphant expression of men who have been working on something in secret and cannot wait any longer to show it off.
It was a gambeson. It did not look like much. It was plain, dun-colored, close-quilted in narrow vertical channels, with a high, thick collar and a skirt to the thigh.
“The outer layer is hemp, my lady,” Haldor said, “treated with oil against the rain. Beneath that is a single layer of something Aldo found.” He nodded to the archer.