The Vallis Defense: Cold Human
Copyright© 2026 by Cold Creek Tribute Writer
Chapter 11: Watch and Be Watched
The Chatter, December 2011
Penelope opens the intelligence section of the morning briefing with a shift in tone that Waylon has learned to recognize over months of these sessions. She is presenting something that requires a decision.
Over the past several weeks, her intercepts of classified US government traffic have tracked a change in the institutional conversation around Arman and Rava Truong. What began as Admiral Arnold and Corwin’s closely held CIA-DGSE surveillance operation, limited in distribution, has leaked upward through Langley’s reporting chain. The National Security Council and the Department of Defense have the file. The intelligence Arnold kept contained has spread beyond his ability to manage it.
Waylon stands at the operations center’s main display surface and listens. The corridor light behind him carries the faint amber tint of Martian dawn, and he does not interrupt.
Penelope lays out the substance of the chatter. Elements within the NSC and the DoD are pushing to approach Arman and Rava directly, to develop them as intelligence assets, a bridge to Waylon and Free Vallis technology. Defense contractors with cleared personnel supporting congressional oversight committees are aware through the revolving door between government service and private industry. They see the Truongs as access points to capabilities that would reshape the defense sector overnight. Penelope reads the intercepts without editorial comment.
“Arnold and Corwin oppose the approach,” Penelope says. “Dana Marsh has written a formal memo calling it counterproductive and documented it with the working group. Arnold made a private call to the President three days ago.”
“What did he say?” Waylon asks.
Penelope provides the answer. Arnold’s memo to the President references the China incident, a single line noting that his original assessment remains unchanged.
Waylon asks what that means. Penelope pulls the original briefing notes from the crisis itself, the record kept while Captain Arnold was in the room with the President as the strikes fell on China, and reads his words verbatim. “Sir, I’m thinking it’s a bad idea to piss off a Texan holding the high ground.” The words Arnold used after General Zhou was annihilated. He said it once and did not repeat it.
Arnold is doing his job, but he is one man operating on Presidential authority in a system full of people who do not always agree with the President and do not share his patience.
Cass delivers the defense section. The probe at bearing 047 remains stationary, no movement since the November repositioning, signature unchanged across all bands, and she has expanded the detection envelope twice and found nothing else to report. The observation platform Norm rebuilt launched two weeks ago and runs silent toward bearing 047 with another two to three weeks of transit ahead of it, holding inside Barry’s power threshold and reading as one more icy body on a long eccentric orbit. The probe gives no sign it has detected the platform’s approach. Until it reaches station the constructor network carries the watch alone.
Chief, Arman, and Rava join from Tahiti. Chief and Norm built the security architecture around the Truong residence: overlapping sensor rings extending two kilometers out, passive monitoring of local police, fire, and military, airport manifests screened for anomalies before every inbound flight touches down.
Chief confirms what he flagged weeks ago. The DGSE surveillance has intensified. New vehicles on the coastal road. A second observation post he identified three days ago, better concealed than the first but not invisible to his network. The DGSE positioned it in a rental property four hundred meters south of the access road, angled to cover the front gate and the gravel drive. Chief mapped the equipment through the walls: directional microphones, telephoto optics, a signals collection rig pulling everything within range. He knew someone was watching before he knew who. Penelope’s intercepts identified the DGSE. But there is a third team. Different equipment, tradecraft, no signature matching to any government service Penelope can identify. Gunny names it first: this looks like the corporate side Penelope flagged earlier, defense contractors moving on their own initiative, answerable to shareholders instead of a chain of command.
“Both teams are in a watch-and-report posture,” Chief says. “The corporate group is still setting up. Early stage. They’re learning the ground, not acting on it.”
“Do they concern you?” Waylon asks.
“Their presence concerns me. Their capability does not. Nothing has changed operationally. They’re watching Arman and Rava. I’m watching them. If that balance shifts, I’ll know before they do.”
Waylon turns to the monitor showing Arman and Rava on their lanai. “You’re hearing all of this.” He pauses. “Do you feel safe, or would you like us to bring you to Mars?”
Arman sits steady, Rava beside him. They have been listening.
“We’d like to stay,” Arman says. He glances at Rava before he goes on. “I want to finish flight school. I like the instructors and my classmates, and I’m three months from my certification. Rava loves this house and her garden. If Chief and Gunny believe they can protect us, we’d prefer to be here.”
“Chief?” Waylon asks.
“I can protect them.”
Gunny does not hesitate. “Affirm.”
Waylon accepts it. These are not people he orders. These are people he trusts to know their own lives, and they have made their choice with full knowledge of what sits outside their front gate.
Waylon looks at the faces in the room and listens to the voices. Deni stands near, hands at her sides. She lost her first life to a government that decided the people on an island were acceptable collateral in a strategic equation. Gunny stands near the far wall, eyes tracking between the display and Waylon, and he does not wait for the order. While the briefing continues, Gunny sends an alert order to his Praetorians. “First fire team, saddle up. Deployment orders to follow.”
Waylon touches the gold cross at his throat.
“We’re going to Tahiti,” he says.
“We’ll deliver the Praetorian fire team personally,” Waylon continues. “Deni and Marylee come for the reunion. Gunny surveys the residence and works with Chief on the ground. Bob pilots.”
Gunny confirms before Waylon finishes the sentence.
“Fire team is operational,” Gunny says. “Drilled and ready. Four Praetorians presenting as Polynesian and Tahitian, two men and two women.” His hands stay locked behind his back. “Cover identities handled by Penelope. Local dress, nothing visible. Deployment kit packed. They can board in forty minutes.”
“Make it thirty,” Waylon says.
He turns toward the corridor.
Barry speaks for the first time since the briefing began. “Do you want Earth to see us coming?”
“Let them see it.”
He turns back to the room and crosses his arms. The display surface behind him shows Penelope’s intercept summary, Arnold’s call transcript, Chief’s surveillance map of the Truong property with the new observation post marked in amber.
“Let them see something leave Mars and arrive at Earth in a timeframe that rewrites everything they think they understand about propulsion,” Waylon says. “Then we vanish from every sensor they have. The message writes itself.”
Marylee pushes back from the briefing table and stands. “How long are we staying?”
“Long enough for a meal at the table and a night under a sky,” Waylon says.
On the monitor, Rava is already counting heads. She turns to Arman and the orders come fast: clear the ahima’a, set up the lanai, buy the pork from the farm in Papenoo, and get to the harbor before the best mahi mahi is gone. Arman opens his mouth and Rava is already past him, listing what she needs from the Vietnamese grocer in Papeete. Then she turns back to the camera. “Deni, your chickens are here waiting for you. Two dozen, healthy, loud, and eating everything in my vườn. Please take them before they finish my herbs.”
Waylon’s expression shifts at the word pork and does not recover. Months of greenhouse vegetables and hydrotank fish are fine. Slow-roasted pork from an ahima’a pit is something no constructor on Mars can replicate.
Across the room, Deni’s hands have come off her sides for the first time in the briefing. She is watching Rava, and what she wants is that kitchen. Norm, without being asked, confirms he can have Audacious’s sealed cargo module installed and flight-certified before departure. Nobody rides with the chickens this time.
The Transit
Bob lifts Audacious from the Free Vallis surface. The departure window has been calculated, the ascent profile optimized, and within minutes Mars falls away beneath them. Salmon sky gives way to black. The ship accelerates on a vector that every military tracking station on Earth will eventually record: something is leaving Mars orbit on an Earth-approach trajectory, and its acceleration profile does not correspond to any propulsion system in any nation’s inventory. The transit will take approximately eighteen hours. On Earth, covering this distance would require seven to nine months using a Hohmann transfer orbit. NASA’s most optimistic crewed mission concepts, relying on nuclear thermal propulsion that does not yet exist, project ninety days. Bob will close the same distance before dinner tomorrow.
The cockpit instruments glow in the forward dark. Bob does not speak; his hands rest on the throttle assembly, eyes tracking readouts that confirm the ship is performing exactly as designed.
Midway through the transit, Waylon sits at the galley table with Deni and Marylee. The overhead panels cast amber light across the surface where Deni’s meal is laid out: fish, rice, and a broth she assembled from the greenhouse harvest before departure. Deni sits with her hands folded, and Marylee leans one elbow on the table, watching Waylon and waiting him out.
Gunny opens the briefing without preamble. He has had several weeks with the first Praetorian fire team since they emerged from the lab, and his assessment arrives with clipped satisfaction. He describes their movement discipline, their reaction speed under simulated threat conditions, their capacity to blend into civilian environments without triggering the instinctive unease that Bob’s earlier-generation body produces at close range. He spends the most time on the personal shield system.
“Each unit carries an integrated defensive field,” Gunny says. “Kinetic deflection rated to AK-47 and M4 rifle rounds. Small explosive blasts. Edged weapons. Blunt-force trauma. The field generates from the same substrate architecture as the body itself. Deploys in fractions of a second, invisible when activated.”
The corner of Gunny’s mouth twitches.
“Close-protection application. Two Praetorians flanking a principal extend and merge their individual fields to envelope the person between them. Mobile protective barrier. Moves with the formation. The principal will hardly notice the shield is active.” He folds his arms across his chest. “They simply don’t get hit.”
Waylon leans back. His plate is half-finished, Deni’s fish and rice still hot. He looks toward the nearest speaker mounted above the galley counter, and his eyebrows rise a fraction.
“This sounds like Star Trek,” he says.
Barry takes his time answering. “Which Star Trek. Original or Next Generation.”
Marylee’s mouth curves. Deni lifts her chopsticks and takes another bite.
The conversation opens into territory none of them anticipated. Waylon leans forward with a smirk on his lips.
“All right. What’s next? Replicators? Phasers? Transporters?”
Barry answers each in turn.
“Replicators are simple,” he says. “The engineering is well within our capability. The reason Norm hasn’t deployed them is more practical than you might expect. We don’t know what Earth food tastes like. We can read every description ever written about the flavor of a tomato. I’ve never tasted one. It’s one of the few areas where four billion years of accumulated knowledge falls short, and what is missing is sensory.”
Deni sets her chopsticks down. “We can taste it now. The interim bodies register flavor differently than you experience it. Every meal I cook, every ingredient I handle, builds the reference library Barry needs.” She picks her chopsticks back up. “Once we have enough experience with human food, we can calibrate replicators that will produce meals you’ll recognize and actually want to eat. The organic bodies will improve the resolution considerably.”
“But we still grow and raise our own,” Marylee says. “Replicators fill gaps. The greenhouse, the hydrotanks, the chickens, those are the ecosystem. A settlement that eats from a machine and nothing else is not a home.”
Deni inclines her head. “And you’ll never replace my kitchen.”
“I’d never try,” Barry says.
Marylee laughs, and the sound fills the galley.
Waylon pushes his plate back. “You know what I actually miss? Beer. Cold beer. The kind you drink on a porch in July when the heat is coming off the ground.” He looks at the overhead speaker. “Add that to the list. I want Arman to buy a dozen cases before we leave.”
Deni reaches for her tablet. “Rava and I have already discussed provisions. She is assembling what we need: tropical seeds we can’t source from the greenhouse stock, fruit cuttings for the new growing frames, spices, wine, and whatever Arman can find at the Papeete markets that will survive the transit.” She scrolls through something on the screen. “A supply truck will meet us at the landing site. The sealed cargo module has capacity beyond the chickens.”
Marylee adds without looking up. “I sent Rava a list of seed varieties three days ago. Vanilla, cacao, and four citrus cultivars Norm wants for the secondary greenhouse.”
Waylon grins. The first Earth supply run in over a year, and the manifest is chickens, beer, beef, seeds, and spices. He can live with that.
“Phasers,” Barry continues, “are toys compared to what the Pán and their creators developed. The weapons architecture in the dormant arsenal operates on principles that make directed-energy weapons look like flintlocks.”
Gunny’s chin comes up.
“Transporters aren’t possible,” Barry says. “The processing power and energy requirements for disassembling, transmitting, and reassembling a living being at the molecular level exceed even Pán capability. This is a hard limit, not an engineering challenge. The distinction matters.”
“However,” Barry adds, and the word hangs in the recycled air for a moment longer than it should, “the Pán and their creators do possess the knowledge to create stable wormholes for faster-than-light transit. We haven’t deployed the capability because the visible phenomena it generates would unequivocally confirm the existence of alien technology to anyone observing.”
Waylon straightens, eyebrows climbing toward his hairline.
“We have warp drive,” he says.
“Yes,” Barry confirms.
“All right,” he says.
Waylon lets the disclosure settle, then asks, “Do any of you have favourite works of science fiction?”
Penelope answers first, her voice clear through the port-side speaker. “Robert Heinlein. Stranger in a Strange Land. A novel about an outsider raised by an alien civilization attempting to understand human culture.”
Norm speaks next, the answer already calculated. “Isaac Asimov. I, Robot. The foundational text on the ethics of created intelligence and the obligations between maker and made.”
“Appropriate,” Waylon says.
“Accurate,” Norm corrects.
Barry surprises everyone. “The reimagined Battlestar Galactica,” he says. “Unlike the Pán and their creators, the humans and Cylons in that series found a path to coexistence. They chose to build something together after the war instead of choosing annihilation.” Barry pauses. “I find that instructive.”
Marylee’s hand stops on the table, her eyes fixed on the speaker.
Cass declines to name a preference, and Waylon does not press.
Gunny has been listening; fiction, in his assessment, is a poor substitute for lived operational experience. When the conversational space opens, he squares his shoulders.
“Full Metal Jacket,” he says, “remains the finest goddamn piece of cinema ever produced by any species on any planet in any galaxy, and if any of you sorry sons of bitches disagree, you can take it up with me on the mat.” He folds his arms tighter. “And before anyone says Star Wars, a bunch of pussies in bathrobes waving glow sticks isn’t combat. This is my rifle, this is my gun. One is for fighting, one is for fun.”
Water shoots from Waylon’s nose. He doubles forward, coughing and spluttering, the barracks cadence landing in Gunny’s perfect Ermey growl before Waylon’s brain can build a defense against it. Marylee is up instantly, one hand on his back, the other pulling his glass clear of the table. Deni has not moved. Gunny watches the squid drown in his own juices with a grin so devious it belongs on a wanted poster.
“Noted,” Barry says.
Marylee sets the glass back in front of Waylon and returns to his seat. Waylon wipes his face with the back of his hand, takes a breath, and the table settles.
“The deeper question,” Barry continues, “is not whether we can move a living being from one place to another. It is whether we can create one. In the Aapán era, it was common practice to clone new bodies and transfer an organic mind from an aging or damaged body to a fresh one. Cloned bodies were also used to replace organs and tissue destroyed by disease or injury. The Pán can create organic life, and it will grow and learn and live normally. But we cannot create an exact duplicate of an existing mind.”
He lets the distinction breathe.
“We could build your body again, Waylon. Every cell and every structure. But the mind that inhabited it would be its own. Not yours.” Barry pauses. “Your case was different. The neutron weapon irradiated your body but it didn’t destroy your brain instantly. Neutron exposure degrades neural tissue over hours and days, not seconds. We reached you before the damage became irreversible. The sarcophagus stabilized your neural architecture first, held your mind intact while we rebuilt everything else around it. Had we reached you six hours later, the man who emerged would’ve had your face and none of your memories. Deni and Marylee are new minds built from behavioral templates. They carry the qualities of the people they’re patterned on. They’re not those people. They’re themselves.”
Waylon looks at the table, then at Deni, then at the speaker.
“I want to say something. And I want to say it plainly, because I think it matters that I say it out loud where everyone can hear it.”
Marylee sits straighter, and Gunny’s arms unfold and resettle.
“Barry. Penelope. Norm. Chief. Gunny. Cass. Marylee. Deni.” He names each of them individually, his West Texas cadence giving each name its own space. “You’re sentient beings. You represent life, not organic life, but so what. The distinction between carbon and substrate is a materials question, not an existential one. I’ve never believed otherwise, and I never will.”
Deni’s gaze holds on Waylon, and there is no surprise in it, only confirmation.
Marylee says, “I dream of the ocean. Nobody designed that or anticipated it. It is mine.”
“Yes,” Barry says. “It is.”
Through the galley monitor, Earth grows fractionally brighter against the black. Gunny returns to parade rest. Deni closes her eyes, opens them, and reaches for the teapot. Marylee watches the screen, her reflection ghosted in its surface, the approaching blue-white point centered behind her.
The Vanishing Act
Admiral Arnold reads the Air Force tracking report at his desk in Crystal City. An object has departed Mars on an Earth-approach vector. The acceleration profile has been confirmed by three independent tracking stations. It does not match any propulsion system in any nation’s inventory. Estimated arrival at Earth vicinity: approximately oh-two-hundred Eastern, tomorrow morning.
He reads it a second time. He picks up his pen, sets it down, and pulls up the secure messaging terminal. The note to the working group is brief: an object has departed Mars on an Earth-approach trajectory at speeds that rewrite current propulsion models, estimated arrival window is overnight, all members should expect a follow-up communication within twelve hours, and no action is required at this time. He sends a separate, shorter note to the DNI.
Arnold locks his office, drives home, eats dinner, and sets his phone on the nightstand. He does not expect to sleep through the night.
At oh-one-forty-seven Eastern, the phone rings. Arnold is awake before the second ring. He pulls on a robe and goes downstairs, away from the bedroom, and answers on the secure handset the Pentagon issued him for after-hours contact. The duty officer at the 7th Space Warning Squadron at Beale is controlled but Arnold can hear the strain underneath.
The object entered Earth’s tracking envelope on schedule. Multiple stations confirmed: Colorado, Australia, United Kingdom, all painting the same picture. Speed, trajectory, and signature consistent with the Mars-departure track. NASA and DARPA analysts were monitoring. Then, at oh-one-thirty-one Eastern, the object vanished. Not behind the Earth’s horizon, lost in orbital clutter or masked by any countermeasure in any database. Simultaneously absent from every military and civilian sensor on the planet. The last track placed it on a polar trajectory over the southern hemisphere. No descent profile, impact signature or debris field. Nothing.
Arnold listens. He asks whether any station recorded a transition, a fade, a degradation in signal. The answer is no. The object was present on one sweep and absent on the next. The interval between sweeps was four seconds.
He asks whether any flight plan or notification was filed. The duty officer pauses. Yes. A flight plan appeared in NORAD’s space object catalog approximately ninety seconds before the object entered primary tracking range. Operator: Free Vallis, Mars. Vehicle designation: Audacious. Purpose: routine transit. The filing is procedurally correct in every detail.
Arnold closes his eyes, and opens them.
He thanks the duty officer, instructs him to maintain continuous monitoring and report any further contact immediately, and terminates the call. He drafts two messages. The first goes to the working group: the object has arrived at Earth and disappeared from all tracking, details to follow, the group will convene after the situation develops further. The second goes to the DNI and the President’s national security briefer: same facts, no analysis, no recommendation. The facts are sufficient.
Arnold climbs the stairs and lies in the dark. An object crossed the distance between Mars and Earth in eighteen hours, filed a flight plan under the name Free Vallis, and vanished from every sensor on the planet. Arnold stares at the ceiling. He does not know what it was, where it went, or who was aboard. He knows it is a statement that will cause weeks of headaches.
The Reunion
The ship enters Earth orbit under full stealth approximately eighteen hours after departure. Bob brings Audacious down through the atmosphere on a descent profile that produces no trace. They land at a site Chief scouted close to Rava and Arman’s home. Two blacked-out vans and a supply truck are waiting, arranged by Penelope through a local transport company whose records will show a routine tourist booking. The truck carries Rava’s provisions: crates of tropical fruit, cases of beer and wine, spices from the Vietnamese grocer in Papeete, eight flash-frozen sides of beef packed for transport, seed stock in climate-controlled containers, four citrus cultivars Marylee requested for Norm’s secondary greenhouse trials, and two dozen chickens in ventilated crates that Rava has been feeding from her garden.
Approximately one hour after Audacious vanishes from tracking, the two vans approach the Truong residence. The DGSE surveillance team, positioned on the coastal road with a clear sightline to the property gate, logs the arrival: two vehicles, windows tinted, turning toward the gate at 14:23 local time. The surveillance officer photographs the vans and transmits the images.
Arman is at the front door. Rava is beside him, not behind, her hand locked in his. They have been watching the gate since Chief told them the vans were three minutes out. Arman has not stopped moving all morning. He rearranged the lanai chairs twice, swept the courtyard, and checked the ahima’a pit until Rava told him to stop touching things and come wait with her.
The gate opens and the vans roll through, parking beneath the mature breadfruit tree as the gates close behind them. Doors open. Gunny is out first and moves to the perimeter, mapping the sightlines Chief briefed him on. Then Waylon, Deni, and Marylee. The four Praetorians exit the second van. Two take positions at the compound walls. The other two walk to the garage and go inert, waiting for their first rotation.
Arman is off the step before Rava can hold him. He crosses the courtyard and wraps Waylon in an embrace that lifts the taller man off his heels. Waylon laughs, a startled, full sound, and grabs Arman’s shoulders and pushes him back far enough to look at his face. Arman is grinning, his eyes wet, and he says something in French that makes Waylon laugh harder. Rava reaches them and Waylon folds her in with one arm, the three of them standing under the breadfruit tree, holding on, and the sound they make together is not grief. It is people who survived something, finding each other again.
Then Arman turns and sees Deni. He goes to her, and her arms close around him, and she does not let go.
Waylon stands a few steps back, watching. The breadfruit leaves shift overhead in the trade wind, and for a moment the courtyard holds nothing but family.
Gunny walks the property perimeter talking with Chief. Sightlines, approach vectors, sensor placements. He announces his assessment with a single word: adequate.
Waylon and Arman talk in the garden while the house fills with sounds from the kitchen. The ahima’a pit Arman started the night before has done its work, the pork buried in banana leaves over volcanic rock for fifteen hours, and the smell of it carries across the garden. Arman confirms what he told Waylon by video: he wants to finish his flight training before coming to Mars. His class graduates in the spring. Bob has been running advanced simulator sessions remotely, and Arman is ahead of his cohort in every metric that matters, but the credential is important to him. Rava supports the decision and loves the home. She has made this house home, with her garden, her kitchen, and the view of the water from the bedroom window, and leaving it will cost her something she is willing to pay but not willing to rush.
Waylon respects it and tells Arman that Mars can wait.
Arman smiles. “I know, Mr. Waylon.”
The evening meal fills the lanai. Rava has been cooking since before the vans arrived: slow-roasted pork falling apart at a touch, mahi mahi from the harbor that morning, taro and breadfruit and a Vietnamese salad Deni recognizes from a recipe she used to make on Freehold. The table is set for everyone. Rava does not allow standing or excuses, and overrules Gunny’s objection about leaving his post before he finishes making it.
She puts a plate in front of him and tells him he is eating. Gunny looks at Waylon, and Waylon shrugs.
Gunny sits, picks up a fork, and chews. The table watches. Arman is trying not to smile. Deni is not trying at all.
“This is acceptable,” Gunny says.
Rava refills his plate without asking. Gunny does not refuse. His body can process food but he has never seen the point. The substrate absorbs energy directly and eating is a social function he considers unnecessary. But the pork is doing something his sensory architecture did not anticipate, and the data is novel enough that he wants more of it. Somewhere between the second helping and Rava’s coconut dessert, his posture loosens by a degree that nobody in the room has ever witnessed. He tells a story about a perimeter breach drill where a Praetorian mistook one of Norm’s construction drones for a hostile contact and tackled it into a wall. The delivery is deadpan and the timing perfect. Marylee laughs so hard she puts her head on the table. Arman is wiping his eyes.
Gunny reaches for a third plate. He pauses mid-bite, looks at Rava, and says, “This is delicious.”
Forks stop. Arman turns to Waylon, Marylee lifts her head off the table, and Deni’s chopsticks hover motionless over her bowl. Gunny has just used a word no one present has ever heard him attach to anything that was not a weapons system.
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