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Too Smart for Your Own Good

Copyright© 2026 by Megumi Kashuahara

Chapter 8

The deposition was scheduled for a Monday in December at the offices of Givens & Associates on the fourteenth floor of a building in midtown Manhattan that had the particular gravity of a place where serious things happened routinely and had stopped requiring acknowledgment. Soo Yee had been in serious places before — federal courthouses, university lecture halls, the Yale Law conference room on the night of the first call — but this was different. This was the place where what she had built was going to be formally introduced into the legal record. After today it would not just be a website. It would be evidence.

Her father drove. Her mother sat in the passenger seat with her hands in her lap. Sung Min had taken the train down from New Haven the night before and was in the back seat beside Soo Yee with a manila folder on his knee that he had reviewed three times on the train and twice at the kitchen table after dinner and once more at six-thirty this morning. He was not nervous. He was thorough, which in this family looked the same from the outside.

The city moved past the windows in its December iteration — the light lower and more direct than November, the streets carrying the particular density of a place that had fully committed to the cold. Soo Yee watched it and ran through the deposition structure the way she had been running through it for a week. Percy Givens had prepared her carefully. How to answer. What to answer. The difference between what she knew and what she had concluded and the importance of keeping those categories cleanly separated in her responses. A deposition was not a presentation. It was a record. Every word she said today would be in a document that opposing counsel would read and attempt to use.

She was not worried about opposing counsel. She was worried about saying something imprecise.

“You’ve prepared,” her father said from the front seat. Not a question.

“Yes.”

“Then there’s nothing left to do until you’re in the room.”

He said it the way he said most things — straightforwardly, without ornament, as a simple statement of engineering logic. Preparation was the variable you controlled. Everything after that was execution. Worrying about execution before you were executing was a waste of processing capacity.

Soo Yee understood this. She looked out the window and let the city move past and stopped running through the deposition structure and simply sat.

The conference room at Givens & Associates had a long table and windows that looked north across the city and a court reporter named Mrs. Fallon who set up her equipment with the efficient neutrality of someone for whom this room and this table and this particular quality of morning light were entirely ordinary. Percy Givens was already there when they arrived, in a dark suit that fit him the way suits fit people who wore them as working clothes rather than costumes. Maya Reinholt was beside him with a legal pad and the focused attention that Soo Yee had come to recognize as her baseline state of being.

Harvard’s counsel was a woman named Patricia Sloane from a firm whose name occupied three lines on the business card she handed to Soo Yee’s parents with a smile that was professionally calibrated to communicate reasonableness without conceding anything. She had two associates with her, both male, both carrying the particular alertness of people whose job today was to watch and take notes and say nothing unless instructed.

Soo Yee sat at the table across from the court reporter. Her parents sat against the wall behind her. Sung Min sat beside her — not as her attorney, Percy Givens was clear about that, but as a family member who happened to be a third-year law student, which was a distinction that Patricia Sloane had noted and not objected to.

Mrs. Fallon established the date and time and the names of the parties present. Patricia Sloane confirmed that she understood the witness was a minor and that the proceeding was being conducted with parental consent. Everyone agreed that this was the case.

Then Patricia Sloane looked at Soo Yee across the table.

“Can you state your full name for the record?”

“Park Soo Yee.”

“And your age?”

“Eleven.”

“And you’re currently enrolled in tenth grade.”

“Yes.”

Patricia Sloane’s expression did not change. She had the professional composure of someone who had decided before entering this room that she was not going to let an eleven-year-old’s presence alter her approach, which was itself a kind of concession — you only made that decision consciously if the presence required managing.

The deposition ran for three hours and forty minutes.

Sloane was good. Soo Yee had expected that. She came at the methodology from four different angles over the course of the morning, each approach slightly different, each one designed to find a gap or an inconsistency or a moment where Soo Yee would reach for a conclusion that outran her evidence. She asked about the PACER account three times in different contexts, each time trying to establish that the access had been somehow irregular. It hadn’t been. She questioned the significance threshold, the variable controls, the cross-referencing process. She asked Soo Yee to explain decisions she had made in the analysis as if she were explaining them to someone encountering statistics for the first time, which Soo Yee did without condescension and without impatience, which she could tell from Sloane’s expression was not the response she had been hoping for.

She asked, twice, whether anyone had helped Soo Yee construct the analysis.

“My brother confirmed the legal framework after the analysis was complete. The statistical methodology was my own work.”

“And no one guided you toward the PACER database specifically?”

“No. I found it through independent research.”

“At eleven years old.”

“Yes.”

Sloane held the pause for a moment, which Soo Yee understood as a rhetorical technique rather than a substantive one. The implied skepticism was for the record. For a jury eventually, perhaps, or for a judge reviewing the transcript. The suggestion that an eleven-year-old could not have done this independently and therefore someone else’s hand was in it somewhere. It was the only available attack on the work itself because the work had no methodological vulnerabilities she had been able to locate in three hours of trying.

Soo Yee answered it the same way she answered everything. Precisely and without performance.

When it was over Mrs. Fallon packed her equipment and Patricia Sloane shook hands with Percy Givens in the way of opposing counsel who respected each other without liking each other and collected her associates and left.

Givens waited until the door closed.

“That was excellent,” he said.

“She was looking for the collaborator,” Soo Yee said.

“Yes. She didn’t find one.”

“There isn’t one.”

“I know that. She knows that now too.” He looked at her parents. “Your daughter gave us a clean record today. Methodologically unimpeachable and delivered by a witness that a jury is going to find — “ He considered his word choice for a moment. “Memorable.”

Her father nodded once. “When does the case move forward?”

 
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