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A Most Unusual Passage

Copyright© 2026 by J&J

Chapter 22

Driving up to Brush after school, I took stock of my situation. Everyone treated me like a hero for making the gutsy call and keeping the school open. Indeed, I felt a little heroic myself. On the other hand, they didn’t have to fear Everett’s wrath, and I did. I made it very clear that the call was mine alone, and I took sole personal responsibility, so he would have no trouble focusing his anger on me. And frankly, after my defiance on the school books, I’m sure that no other target would suit him quite so well. I was pretty sure that Everett would try to get rid of me, and the only question in my mind was whether it would be a private assassination or a public hanging.

I figured he’d love a chance to conduct an open hearing and make a spectacle of me in front of an audience. But I wasn’t sure he could feel that confident as to the merits of his case. Even though he didn’t know about my transcript of the conference, Everett must know that Marcus would repudiate the textbook deal, as soon as he regained consciousness. I had to believe that Everett was really counting on Marcus not recovering.

Even with the air-conditioning contract, where he had me dead to rights in a clear violation of policy, he would have to take care. If his argument were that maintaining the contract was crucially important, no matter what the cost to taxpayers, it wouldn’t sit well with the fiscally conservative voters of Otis. The fact was that the contract lacked any sort of performance requirement or opt-out for the county, if the vendor could not perform acceptably. As the contract was written, Orion could just say “sorry, we can’t fix it,” and the school district would lack the legal right to get the unit repaired from any other source. This certainly made Everett’s contracting skills and judgment look questionable at best. My decision to spend $200 to avoid many thousands of dollars for make up days would surely be pretty popular with everyone but Everett.

No, he would have to try for some kind of private school board meeting, where I wasn’t allowed to defend myself. If Everett moved to take action against me, I would demand a public hearing if I could.

When I got to the hospital, Brenda was able to head home early, since I would bring Martha later. Dr. Harley had finally convinced Martha that the chance of Marcus regaining consciousness during the night when there were no stimuli was slight. She was reluctantly persuaded to get some sleep each night, though she confessed to me that sleeping without feeling his presence beside her was difficult.

Things had changed since I last saw Marcus. He was still unconscious, but he no longer lay there motionless; he made little restless motions. I looked at Martha and saw the renewed hope in her face.

“Is he still unconscious?” I asked puzzled. “He seems more like he’s just sleeping.”

“No, he’s still out, but he’s definitely more active. I think I’ve seen his eyes open twice, but only for a split second. Doc says that’s normal, because at first, opening the eyes is very uncomfortable, even painful.”

“Oh, but that’s wonderful Martha; he must he coming out of it,” I said, giving her a hug.

“That’s not the best part; watch this!”

Marcus was stirring restlessly, like someone having a bad dream. Martha took his arm and began a slow gentle stroking with her hand, up and down his forearm. Almost immediately, he became quiet and peaceful.

“Martha,” I practically squealed, “he responded to your touch, but that must mean...”

“That means his coma is very shallow now,” a familiar voice said, “and it won’t last much longer. He knows Martha’s touch; he’s just not quite ready to open communications with our world.”

I turned to gaze into the friendly eyes of Dr. Harley, who had quietly joined us. He seemed as thrilled as Martha.

“I don’t understand,” I said. “I thought you were either in a coma or not. I didn’t know there were levels.”

“Most people think, as you do, that it’s either you are or you aren’t, but almost nothing in medicine is that simple, especially dealing with the brain. Did you both see the movie The Princess Bride?” We nodded. “Do you remember that hilarious scene with Billy Crystal as Miracle Max?”

“You mean the ‘he’s only mostly dead scene’?” I asked. “I laughed so hard I almost cried.”

“Exactly,” said Dr. Harley, “Marcus is only mostly in a coma now. Let me explain it this way; it’s not scientific, but it may help. Think of the brain as a computer. The brain and the computer both have different levels of consciousness. You may say that a brain after a trauma sort of reboots. Now, do you know what the computer’s BIOS is?”

“Yes,” I said, “it’s the very basic instructions that live on the motherboard, so even if the hard disk crashes, the computer can start over.”

“Exactly. Well, humans have the primitive brain that tells the body how to get the lungs to breathe and the heart to beat. If that ever fails, you die. So, no matter how deep the coma, the brain’s BIOS is there. The next thing that comes back when you reboot is the operating system. This is the higher level software that tells the computer how to do more difficult things, like tell a printer to print, or run software. It’s only when all that’s done that the computer will open up communications with you through the mouse and keyboard. Marcus has clearly reached the state where his brain is reloading the operating system. This is crucial. Some patients stay at the BIOS level forever, and that’s called a persistent or permanent vegetative state. The body keeps on living, but without any contact with the world. The fact that Marcus has gotten this far makes his recovery almost certain. He apparently, at some level, recognizes Martha’s familiar touch; he’s attempting to open his eyes; we’re just waiting for our ET here to phone home.”

“When?” Martha asked eagerly.

“I wouldn’t be surprised if we could force him out now, but I think it would be unwise. Let’s all, including Marcus, get a good night’s sleep. Martha, I’d like you to get back here at dawn.”

“That’s no problem for anyone living on a farm,” Martha replied, “but why dawn in particular?”

“Dawn is when the body is most apt to change states; that’s when the terminally ill most often slip away; that’s when people in a coma are most likely to wake up. And we may need most of the day. He’s not going to just suddenly sit up and say hello. We want to bring him back gently and allow him to get used to each new level of sensation. And I have some special instructions for you, Martha.”

“You name it, Doc; I’ll do it.” “This won’t be hard,” he said. “I just want to give him all the familiar clues possible. I want you to wear his favorite perfume, and lots of it. Wear his favorite dress; bring his favorite food, anything that will remind him of the familiar.”

“And what do I do?”

“I’ll leave that up to you. Rub his arm like you’re doing. Call his name. Whatever you can do that will feel nice and normal and welcoming.” He chuckled, “Well, anything you can do in public anyway.”

Martha looked at him perfectly seriously. “Don’t laugh, Doc; I’d dance naked through the main lobby, if I thought it would bring my Marcus back to me ten minutes faster.”

Dr. Harley smiled. “I have no doubt that you mean every word of it, and that’s why I’m so happy to help bring the two of you back together. Believe it or not, I have had wives in your position refuse to go to the trouble of even dressing up, and I frankly wondered if saving their husbands was doing them much of a favor. I’ll see you bright and early tomorrow, and we’ll see if we can get sleeping beauty here to wake up”

As he was turning to leave, he stopped. “Elizabeth, would you join me for a cup of coffee; I’d like to speak to you privately.”

I glanced over at Martha. If she had heard, she made no comment. She seemed focused back on Marcus, so I nodded and went with him.

We made small talk, until we sat at a quiet table in the corner of the coffee shop.

I looked at him expectantly. “Are you sure this isn’t something you should be talking to Martha about?”

He laughed. “Well, perhaps, but she seems happily married, so I guess I’ll have to settle for you.”

I blushed furiously, as I realized my enormous faux pas. This wasn’t about Marcus; this was about me, and my radar had totally failed to see it coming.

“Consider me second choice to any other woman old enough to be my grandmother, and I’d be highly insulted, but I’m not sure I would want to compete with Martha.”

He laughed. “She is a very attractive woman, regardless of age.”

 
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