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A Long Way Home

Copyright© 2026 by Asa Strong

Chapter 9

We were sitting on the patio, looking east, the smell of burnt sagebrush filling the air with an oily odor. My father turned to me and said, “Hoyt, that was scary. I don’t think my heart has stopped pounding. I have never been so afraid in my life.”

I finished the pull on my beer, and then responded. “I know what you mean, Dad. Everything happened so fast that I didn’t have time to think of anything but getting the trucks in the garage.”

With a puzzled expression in his voice, my father asked, “You must have thought something like this would happen when you designed this house. Or was it all just a coincidence?”

“Dad, it doesn’t take much thought to look at the land around us here and imagine what a fire would be like. Especially given how much the wind blows out here, there’s nothing to stop it. Right from the start, I realized that an underground home had a lot of advantages: the house would be energy efficient, it would blend in with the surrounding terrain, and most importantly, it would be impervious to fire.

“The whole house was designed for the environment here. Underneath this concrete patio we’re sitting on is a layer of gravel that slopes from the center of the house at a two-degree angle. This allows for drainage on the few occasions when we have thunderstorms here.”

“It must have taken you quite a while to build,” he said, taking a draw from the beer bottle.

“No, not really. Once JR and I had the dome shell sprayed and cured, it went pretty quickly. The two of us took a week off to let the concrete cure, and when we came back, it was only a matter of finish work. We had the whole thing finished three weeks after we got back.”

We sat there in companionable silence for a few minutes when Dad shocked the hell out of me.

“You know, Hoyt; I didn’t think I would like it here. That first day when we got here, I thought you had lost your mind. All I could see was a vast area with nothing around it.”

He paused for a moment, “I was wrong, you know; there’s a lot of life and beauty out there,” he said, pointing out towards the burnt sagebrush. “You just have to know where to look for it.”

We talked for a few more minutes, mostly about some of the specifics of how the house had been constructed, when we were interrupted by the telephone ringing.

“Hello,” I answered.

“Hoyt, this is Dwight. Looks like Marsh lost his house to the fire.”

“How bad is it?” I asked.

Dwight paused a moment, then answered, “From what he said, they lost the house and the barn. They managed to get everyone down into the tornado shelter before the fire got to the house. They were damn lucky that there was such a strong wind, or they might have suffocated in there. Anyway, I’m calling around to all the neighbors to see if they want to help.”

“Sure, Dwight, how can I help?”

“Well, the close neighbors have them all covered as far as a place to stay, but I was thinking that maybe you could help with tearing down the house. How about we meet and take a look at what needs to be done?”

“Sure, Dwight, I’ll meet you at your place soon as I can.”

“I’ll be waiting on you,” he said, hanging up the phone.

I returned the phone to the cradle and walked back out to the patio.

“Dad, Marsh lost his house to the fire. I’m going to head over to Dwight’s and we’re going to take a look at it. You want to come?”

“Sure, let me get some boots on and I’ll be right with you.”

When we arrived at Dwight’s farm, he was waiting for us in the yard. With a wave, he jumped in his pickup and headed down the farm lane, and I followed. After about ten minutes, we all arrived at Marsh’s farm. I had not been here before, but could see that it had been hit pretty badly by the fire. The barn had been made of wood and was mostly burned to the ground. The house was made of cinderblock, and although the walls were standing, the roof was completely gone.

When Dad and I got out of the truck, Dwight was already talking to Marsh and a couple of other men I didn’t know.

Dad and I walked up to the group of men and listened to the conversation. Marsh, of course, was more than a little upset but was also pretty stoic about it as well.

“Hoyt,” Dwight said, turning towards me, “you’ve done a lot of construction work. Do you think we can save the house?”

“I don’t know. Let’s take a closer look.”

Dwight, Marsh, and I trooped through the house. They were interested in looking at the interior structural elements. I knew that these could be replaced; my concern was the outside cinderblock walls. I spent a half hour inspecting both the inside and outside of the exterior walls before I was ready to state my opinion.

When Dwight and Marsh had finished looking at the inside of the structure, they had joined me for the last part of my inspection.

“Marsh, I think the whole thing is going to have to come down.”

He looked at me in disbelief. “Why, the walls are still standing, and it looks good to me?”

“Let me show you,” I said, walking up to the north side of the house.

I pointed halfway up the side of the wall, “Look here, you see how gray the mortar looks?”

I took my pocket knife out and extended the blade and ran it down a mortar seam. Large portions of caked mortar broke loose and fell to the ground.

“Marsh, the heat of the fire has caused the mortar and cinderblocks to expand, the result being that this wall is rather weak from about the middle of the wall all the way to the top.”

Marsh didn’t want to hear the truth and said it would be OK. I just shook my head, no sense in trying to talk to someone who was already convinced they were right.

Dad and I offered our help, and I was about to get ready to go back home when a large pickup truck with the county seal on the doors showed up. The man got out and introduced himself as the county fire marshal.

Marsh asked him what he was here for, and the man explained that he was the fire marshal from the county fire department and it was part of his job to inspect all dwellings that had been in a fire for safety.

I nudged Dad with my elbow, and he looked at me with a puzzled look on his face. I leaned over and whispered in his ear, “Let’s stick around for a few more minutes, it’s about to get real interesting.”

He looked back at me like I was crazy as a loon, but we walked back over to where all of the men were gathered.

What Dad didn’t understand was just how independent the people around here were. They and their forebears had built a place for themselves to live without much outside help, and they really didn’t like the government sticking its nose into matters like this.

By this time, the talking had changed to shouting, and I was afraid that things would really get out of hand. I caught Dwight’s eye and motioned for him to come over so we could talk.

“Dwight, y’all can jaw all day long with that man, and it ain’t going to change his mind one bit. He’s just doing his job. Things keep going on like this, and y’all are going to be talking to the sheriff or state police.”

Washington County is pretty big in size, but there really were not many people who lived here. This meant that the county departments were very familiar with the feelings and beliefs of their citizens. This is why I was not surprised to see a Colorado State Police car come roaring into the yard with the lights flashing.

Dwight’s jaw tightened, and I was afraid there was going to be a real melee, but the arrival of the police seemed to quell the loud rhetoric some and eventually the shouting died down, and the fire marshal started his inspection. He spent a lot of time going over the structure, and I also noticed he looked very carefully at the outside walls. When he finished, he walked back to his truck and started filling out some forms.

I could tell from watching him inspect the outside walls that he had seen the same thing I did. So, it was no surprise to me when he walked back to where Marsh was standing and handed him a condemnation notice. I was all set for a big explosion from Marsh, but it didn’t happen. He just shook his head and walked out towards the pasture, with his back towards us.

I intercepted the fire marshal as he was leaving and introduced myself to him. I also had a quick discussion about his assessment of the structure. I guess he could tell by the way I was talking and the terms I used that I knew how to build. His assessment was pretty much like my own. The building would have to be torn down and a new structure built. The only thing usable would be the foundation.

I walked back to Dwight and informed him Dad and I were going back home, and to let Marsh know that we were available to help in any way we could.

On the trip home, Dad was pretty quiet, and I could tell he was chewing on something in his mind; every once in a while, he would look over at me with a strange look, and then pull back into himself.

Dinner that night was a quiet affair. Dad was still in the same introspective mood. After dinner, I cleared off the table and loaded the dishwasher, grabbed a beer out of the refrigerator, and retired to the back patio. The wind had blown all day, and there was only a faint tinge of smell from the fire. The night was clear, and the stars were putting on quite a show when I heard the patio door open.

Dad grabbed a chair and pulled it up close to me, sat down, and took a pull from his beer. He looked me straight in the eye.

“Hoyt, I’ve got some things to tell you. I’ve been meaning to do this for the past few months, but never could get up the courage to start. Today, when we were over at that farm and I saw that house burned, it made me realize that anything could happen in this world. It also gave me the courage to finally tell you everything.”

I had no idea where he was going with this. My dad and I had never been very communicative. It was better now than when I was a kid, but one sure couldn’t call it a close relationship. I nodded back at him, not knowing what to say.

Dad took a deep breath and then continued. “I guess the only way to say this is just come right out with it. Hoyt, I’m not your real father, and your mother was not your real mother.”

 
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