Borna: the First Chronicle of Hvad
Copyright© 2026 by AspernEssling
Chapter 1: A Wedding and Several Funerals
I will tell the truth.
I was with Borna from the very beginning. In fact, he chose me as his very first Hand, the day he turned sixteen. A Lord’s Hand is his right-hand man, his advisor and confidante, as well as his bodyguard. The Hand guards his Lord’s left side, in a fight. We had been friends from birth, you see.
- “Why him?” asked his father, the Hospodar. Gosdan was our Chief, the head of our community. He acted as judge, resolving disputes and punishing criminals. The Hospodar was usually the leader in war-time, as well.
But he screwed up his face as he said it. “There are others who are stronger. Quicker, more agile. Better warriors.”
- “Because Ljudevit is bright.” said Borna. “He is my friend, and I trust him with my life.” (my name, in case you are wondering, is pronounced Le-you-de-vit)
- “You think that will be enough?”
- “There are plenty of strong men, and good warriors. But a man I can trust is a precious commodity.” answered his son. “And don’t forget his brains: Ljudevit is one of the smartest people I know.”
The Hospodar scowled, but let his son’s choice stand. Even then, Borna was stubborn.
Is it any wonder that I followed Borna, when he said things like that? Of course, that comment about my brains didn’t endear me to the other warriors. I took some abuse for that, I can tell you, and it wasn’t just good-natured ribbing. I had to fight, several times, and I took my lumps.
But I knew then that I would follow him until I grew too old to watch his back, or died fighting.
Yes, I will tell you the truth. Even when it is not flattering to me, or to Borna.
- “Something’s up.” I said, to Borna.
He followed the direction of my gaze, and caught sight of Dirayr, who was examining a horse’s shoe. “You’re right.” he said. “We must be going somewhere.”
It was a logical conclusion, if his father’s retainer was picking out horses. I say horses, but in Hvad, our mounts are more akin to ponies. Unlike those great beasts the Izumyrians breed, ours aren’t very big, and they’re not particularly fast. But they’re tireless. They can run a long way, carrying a man, even in armour. They’ll carry a load of rocks, if that’s what you want.
It doesn’t pay to treat them as if their endurance is limitless, of course. But you get the point. They’re small, sure-footed, and tough.
We don’t fight on horseback, anyway. A horse is just to get you there faster. We dismount to fight, with spear and shield, axes and long knives. None of that high and mighty cavalry, like the Izumyrians.
But I’m getting ahead of myself. I didn’t know anything of cavalry, or Izumyrians, at that point. It was the day our lives changed, and Borna started to become Borna. He was sharpening a knife with his whetstone - Borna was a great one for sharpening things. I sat beside him, scrubbing a stubborn rust spot off his byrnie (a coat of ring mail over a stout leather tunic; you might call it a hauberk).
A shadow fell across the work I was doing. It was Antras, Borna’s older brother, stepping between me and the sun. If you think that it was accidental, then you didn’t know Antras. This sort of petty annoyance was one of his favourite ways to pass the day.
Antras was the elder, by almost two years. He was considerably bigger than Borna, and four times as arrogant as anyone I had ever met. He wore his shirt of chain mail every day, pretending to be a great warrior, though everyone knew that his fighting experience was limited to sparring sessions.
Antras also believed himself to be handsome. To be fair, I suppose he was, in a rough-hewn sort of way. His looks had been slightly marred, or perhaps improved, by an angry scar near the corner of his left eye. Antras got that when he was 11.
He had been attempting to drown his 9 year old brother in the stream. Borna escaped his grasp long enough to seize a stick, and tried to plunge the jagged end into Antras’ eye. He missed, by an inch and a half. When they were children, the wound had looked horrific. Now that he was a man grown, the scar just served to give Antras ‘character’.
Since then, the brothers had tread warily around each other. Borna had me, as well, to watch his back. And Antras had chosen his own Hand. Khoren was a brute. A massive brute, to be exact. He kept the hair on his enormous square head close-cropped. His mouth was forever twisted in a permanent scowl. He was also a head taller than me, and outweighed me by thirty pounds. He was built like a bear, with a brain to match.
There were many more differences between the two brothers. Borna was fastidious, almost obsessed with cleanliness. He bathed regularly, and compelled me to do the same. It was an inexplicable habit he got from his mother, I suppose.
Antras, by contrast, was careless, almost slovenly. He left the care of his clothing and armour and weapons to others. The sheepskin cloak he wore looked dull, and a little tattered. He didn’t take good care of it, and so it had lost its original lustre, after repeated washing.
Borna sweet-talked the girls. All of the girls. He dallied with quite a few, but he was kind and generous with all of them. Antras, on the other hand, thought that the girls should come to him. He was petty and made cutting remarks about any woman who didn’t treat him the way he expected. What he expected was that they would lie down or bend over so that he could hump them.
Borna was clever and quick-thinking, but he would also listen to others (including me) and then mull over what was said. For example, Borna had grown his hair long, and tied it in a ponytail. One day, Mihran, his father’s Hand, grabbed that ponytail and yanked the boy off his feet.
- “An enemy could take hold of that.” growled Mihran. “Easily.”
Borna was angry, but he wasn’t stupid. Mihran was unquestionably the best warrior among us. Advice from him was tantamount to a message from on high. Borna immediately cut off the ponytail, and then shaved the sides of his head, for good measure. He insisted that I do the same.
- “It’ll keep the lice out of your hair.” he suggested.
- “Your hair, you mean. I got them from you.” I replied.
The next day, though, Mihran frowned when he saw Borna’s partially-shaven skull. “Thick hair can cushion a blow - especially under a helmet.” he remarked.
Borna couldn’t instantly grow his hair back, so he devised simple felt caps which we could wear under a helmet, as additional padding. They were itchy, and made us sweat - and we looked stupid - but he was quite proud of the idea, especially when Mihran noted that the pads might have some merit.
Antras had immediately shaved the sides of his own head, and then said that the notion had been his all along. He sneered at Borna, and accused his ‘little brother’ of copying him. Borna was furious, and claimed that Antras had stolen his idea.
Mihran, of course, could have ended this posturing with a few words. But he didn’t. He might not have wanted to intervene in a dispute between the brothers. Or perhaps he just didn’t want to antagonize the boy who would one day succeed Gosdan as Hospodar. That struck me as very short-sighted. I didn’t tell him so, though; Mihran would not have appreciated advice from me. No doubt he would have cuffed me for my presumption.
My point is this: the brothers were quite unlike, and bitter rivals. Antras was an asshole, and he was in the wrong more often than not. You will say that I am biased. Of course I am. But I will readily admit that Borna was not entirely blameless.
With Antras blocking my light, I had two choices: I could move, or wait for him to leave. I chose the second option. He would give up and go away when he saw that he wasn’t irritating me as much as he’d hoped. Eventually.
- “Antras! Borna!” We heard Mihran’s deep voice, calling from the steps of the great hall. He waved us over. Borna and I immediately put our work down. Antras strutted off ahead of us.
“Your father wants you.” added Mihran, when we drew near.
All through my childhood, I believed that the great hall of Gosdan’s steading was a massive building, fit for a great ruler. The central fire pit was enormous; above it, there was a large opening in the roof to let the smoke escape.
Trestle tables lined both sides, with enough space for forty warriors. Wooden pegs had been hammered into the walls, to allow men to hang up wet sheepskins and cloaks, or to sling their shields against the wall.
During a feast, servants would remove the spears and axes: sharp weapons and heavy drinking do not mix well. The men would still have knives, of course, for eating, but knife fights are easier to break up than sword fights. Less lethal, too - sometimes.
At the end of the hall, on a raised platform, Gosdan could sit at his own table. Sometimes his sons sat there, or honoured guests. Our Hospodar was renowned for the quality as well as the quantity of meat and drink he provided. Generosity is a good thing, in a leader.
As we entered, Borna saw that Antras was passing to the right of the fire pit. Automatically, then, we went to the left.
When we arrived at the head of the hall, it was to find that Antras had seized the central position, directly in front of their father. Borna could have stood beside his brother, but he hated having Antras looking down at him. So he stayed a little further to the left.
- “Come closer, Borna.” said our Hospodar.
- “I am well enough here, Father.”
Gosdan frowned. He was well aware of these trivial little games his sons played. But he pretended not to see them.
He leaned back in his chair, and struck a pose. Our Hospodar was not physically impressive. Gosdan was of average height, and slim build. He was always wrapped about with furs, which he believed made him look bigger. I suspected that they also kept him warm, because he was susceptible to chills.
He held a spear in one hand, and clutched the pommel of his sword with the other. His thin lips were tightly compressed. Gosdan liked to appear stern, and martial.
- “My sons,” he began, “I have called you here today because I have news. Important news.”
There was nothing odd about me hearing this exchange between father and son. There are no secrets between a man and his Hand. You can’t keep your Lord safe if you aren’t present. I went everywhere Borna did. That was why I stood two paces behind him now, listening to his conversation with his father. Likewise, Mihran stood beside Gosdan. Mihran had been the Hospodar’s Hand for many years. He had mastered the skill of seeing everything, and hearing everything - while pretending that he did not. I was still working on that.
As a Hand, my main occupation was to watch Borna’s back. I followed wherever he went. If he had to move his bowels, I waited nearby and kept watch while he did it. His armour and weapons were my concern, too. And his horse. Borna paid attention to those things, on his own, but essentially they were my responsibility.
- “Tomorrow,” said Gosdan, “we leave on an important journey.” He paused to let his words sink in.
- “Where?” asked Antras. “You haven’t told us anything.”
Their father did love his little secrets. “We are going ... to Asrava’s steading.”
Asrava was another Hospodar, though not quite as wealthy or as powerful. We did not have many dealings with him, except for the usual sheep and cattle raids, or settling debts when blood was spilled between the warriors on either side.
- “It is high time,” continued Gosdan, “that you were married.”
- “Who?” asked Antras.
- “Why?” said Borna, at almost the same time.
- “I have offered Asrava an alliance. A marriage offer. He has accepted, in principle. We will meet in person, to hammer out the details.”
- “So who’s getting married?” asked Antras, a little louder.
Gosdan had two sons, and two daughters - but the girls were only 11 and 8 years old. He had fathered nine children, with two wives, but only four of his offspring had survived. Asrava, for his part, had a son, named Mushtal, and two daughters.
- “That is what we are going to work out.” said Gosdan. He seemed slightly annoyed. He probably had some sort of speech prepared, but his sons were spoiling it with their questions. “It all depends on Asrava. I made the original offer, which he has accepted. But we do not know yet, if he wants you, Antras, for his eldest - or Borna for the younger girl. Or both.”
- “You’re leaving the choice to him?” asked Borna. “Why?”
- “This is diplomacy, my son. Asrava’s choice will tell me a great deal about how serious he is.”
- “I don’t understand. Why would you leave the choice to Asrava? And why are you seeking a marriage alliance at all?”
Gosdan touched his nose - a signal that what he was about to say was a secret. “I need Asrava’s support. Manahir is failing.”
Manahir was the Ban of Yeseriya, the Overlord of our province. He acted as Hospodar in his own area, but he had two more Hospodars subject to his authority: Gosdan and Asrava. Manahir had almost 100 warriors in his druzhina, or warband, plus a son and three strong grandsons to follow him.
But while the post of Hospodar was hereditary, the Banate was not. On the death of the incumbent, the province’s warriors and land-holders would gather to elect a new man. It would not necessarily be Manahir’s son, or one of his grandsons.
Borna’s father could call on 50 fighting men, and the third Hospodar, Asrava, another 30. An alliance between the two, cemented by a marriage, could be decisive. They could swing a large number of the uncommitted to their side.
- “Manahir is always failing.” said Borna.
- “I have it on good authority, this time.” replied Gosdan. “He is not expected to last the winter. Do you see, now, why I need Asrava? And why you, Antras, must be on your best behaviour? The man who cannot control himself is not worthy of having mastery over others. The same holds true for you, Borna.”
- “I can behave.” said Borna.
- “And hold your peace? Remember: Many perils come from talking too much.”
I tried to control it, but the corner of my lip curled, as if of its own volition. Gosdan was full of these pithy sayings. In two years as Borna’s man, I had heard them over and over. ’Knowing how to hold one’s tongue is a great virtue’ was another of his favourites.
In other words: shut up.
- “I need you to be on your best behaviour, the day after tomorrow.” said their father. “Both of you.”
Asrava’s steading was not that far away - less than two days’ ride. A day and a half, really. We were in no great hurry.
Three things of note happened on our journey.
First, I counted our party. There were seventeen of us. Gosdan, his two sons, and the three Hands. Ten warriors. And the guslar.
A gusle, or gusla, is a long-necked, single stringed musical instrument, that looks like a lute. The sound box comes out of a single piece of maple, or chestnut, and is then covered with animal skin. The neck is long, and the head often intricately carved.
The gusle player, called a guslar, holds the instrument vertically, between his knees. The fingers of his left hand are held against the string, but he never presses the string to the neck of the instrument. A horsehair bow is pulled across it.
It produces a sharp, dramatic sound. They say that a gusle is extremely difficult to master. Apparently, people around Stonje use two strings, but I’ve never been anywhere near Stonje, and I’ve never seen it in Yeseriya.
While he plays, the guslar can sing, but most often, he recites an epic poem. We love heroic tales, and the old legends. Some of them are even true.
A guslar is an honoured guest in a Hospodar’s steading, especially over the long winter months. Treat them generously, and they will sing of your largesse for years afterwards. But they never forget a bad turn, either. It’s unwise to insult a guslar, unless you want your misdeeds immortalized in song.
Gosdan had taken on a young guslar, named Ansis. Borna and I referred to him as ‘Teeth’. He had a mouthful of large, white teeth, which he showed off at every opportunity. He was always smiling, especially at the young women of our steading - which did not particularly endear him to the young men.
Teeth also liked to inject a note of humour into some of the tales he sang. It’s true enough that not everything has to be deadly serious. But then again, there isn’t always a funny side.
Ansis was young. After two months, we had heard every song and poem he knew. But still, Gosdan kept him on. Now we understood why. Our Hospodar was ambitious. If he was aiming at the Banate, having a guslar to sing his praises could only help.
- “Why bring the guslar?” I asked Borna. “Is it to show how generous he is? Does he think that Asrava’s men will be impressed by his wealth?”
- “I don’t know, Ljudevit. I wasn’t even aware of this marriage plan until yesterday.”
- “Or does your father expect the guslar to compose a song? The love song of Antras and Asrava’s daughter?”
- “Ha! I can hear it already!”
- “I can, too.” I said. “That’s the problem!”
We passed several herders, with their flocks of sheep, or goats. Some of the more prosperous had cattle. Yeseriya is a land of forests, and gently rolling plains. The land is not particularly fertile. But the flocks and herds looked healthy. It had been a good year, so far.
Later that day, I asked Borna a more serious question. My parents were tremendously proud when Borna chose me to be his hand. My father, especially, gave me mountains of unsolicited advice.
- “You’re there to listen.” he told me. “Not to criticize. If he wants to bounce ideas off you, you shut up and let him. Don’t be a smartass.”
Good advice, I suppose, even if it sounded a lot like my father’s frequent criticisms of me. I was more than ready to listen to Borna. Unfortunately, Gosdan’s younger son was often close-mouthed. If it was a problem, he wouldn’t tell me anything until he’d solved it himself.
Or, if he had a plan which involved me, he wouldn’t say a word until it was too late to talk him out of it. That was why I’d taken to raising ideas with him - stringing the bow, if you like, rather than waiting for him.
- “Why only seventeen men?” I asked. “Why so few?”
- “You think we should make a greater show of force?” asked Borna.
- “Asrava has thirty warriors. Why wouldn’t your father bring the same number? Or more?”
Borna didn’t say anything. Some time later, though, he went over to ride alongside Gosdan. He came back almost immediately.
- “He says it’s because Asrava’s hall isn’t big enough for so many. And because if we brought thirty men and thirty horses, we would empty Asrava’s larder.”
I didn’t have to say anything more. We both knew that these were excuses. Gosdan’s entire druzhina didn’t have to fit into Asrava’s hall. And if our host couldn’t afford to feed us all for a day - which was unlikely - then Gosdan could have brought food and drink. What better way to display your wealth and generosity?
No, Gosdan was bending over backwards to accommodate Asrava’s wishes. He really wanted this alliance.
The second thing of note about our journey was the weather. We departed in a morning mist, cold and damp. By mid-morning, the rain began.
At first, it was just an autumnal shower. But the rain gradually increased in intensity, until it became a steady downpour. And then a storm. A torrential downpour. We were lashed with sheets of water. There was no cover, no escaping it. Every bit of clothing we wore was thoroughly drenched.
My armpits were still mostly dry, I suppose. But the water ran down my face, and trickled in little rivulets under my wet clothing, down my back, and along the crack of my ass. The leather of my saddle was sodden, and the damp was spreading underneath me.
I was thoroughly miserable. Heads down, we hunched under our cloaks and sheepskins. There was some grumbling, of course, and some muttering about finding shelter, but nothing serious. The horses couldn’t have liked it any better than we did, but they plodded along with fewer complaints.
Then the storm took on a malevolent aspect. It teased us, seemed to relent, or to stop altogether, only to return full force a moment later. There was something unnatural about it, as though the elements were punishing us.
Gosdan called a halt, which led directly to the third event.
- “We’ll rest here!” shouted Gosdan. “Look to your horses! Try to get a fire started!”
We were skirting the edge of the great forest, so it was a simple matter to bring the horses under the partial shelter of overhanging branches. Finding dry wood would not be so easy, unless the men went further in. Happily, that would not be a task for me.
I had just gotten the saddle and sodden blanket off Borna’s horse, and was turning to start on my own. Khoren, likewise, was seeing to Antras’ horse, trying to rub the animal down with a soaking wet blanket.
I can’t say for sure who started it. But it looked to me like Borna deliberately shook out his cloak in Antras’ direction, spraying him with a few drops of water. That was enough to set Antras off, and he went for Borna. Next thing I knew, fists and elbows were flying.
Antras was bigger, and heavier. He tried to grapple, to pull his brother down. Borna made him pay, with an elbow to the mouth.
- “ENOUGH!” roared Gosdan.
That didn’t stop them. Antras got in a solid punch to the ribs, and Borna swung at his brother’s head, but missed.
- “BORNA!” yelled their father. “ANTRAS!”
Mihran grabbed hold of Borna’s shoulder, pulling him back. He put his other hand on Antras’ chest, and pushed him back a step. This time, the brawling brothers subsided. They would not carry on - not with the Hospodar’s Hand between them.
You may be wondering why I didn’t intervene, or go to my Lord’s assistance. Well, for one thing, he wouldn’t have thanked me for it. Borna liked to fight his own battles. Unless weapons were drawn - that would have been different.
If I had stepped in, that would have brought Khoren, too - and that evil bastard would have liked nothing better. Khoren wouldn’t have dared to attack Borna; he would’ve gone straight for me. Or he could have come at me from behind.
Our Hospodar wisely gave his sons a few moments to cool down. They glared at each other, of course. But this particular skirmish was over. For now.
Borna was still angry, but not at me. He submitted to a quick examination, as I checked to see what damage his brother had done.
- “You’ll have a bruise on your ribs.” I told him. “And a cut over your eyebrow. Lucky, this time.”
- “Hmm.”
- “Have you considered where we’re going to go?” I asked Borna.
- “What?” He finally looked at me. “What are you talking about, now?”
- “Where we’re going to go. Your father can’t live forever. And on the day your brother becomes Hospodar...”
- “Hmm.” he grunted again. We had had this conversation before.
- “It could go very badly for us.” I said.
- “Maybe.” he admitted.
- “You don’t seem very concerned - for a man who may be about to get married.”
- “Maybe.” he said. “No point in worrying about maybes I can’t change.” Then he winked at me. “Yet.”
We did get a large fire built, on the edge of the wood, but the rain simply didn’t let up. Nobody got dry. And I doubt if anyone slept very well.
It wasn’t just the fact that we were soaked through. We may live on the edge of the forest, but no man feels completely safe inside it, especially at night. There are wild animals, and wild men, and many things in between. Many a brave man has gone into the woods at night, and they haven’t always come back.
We were a wet, tired, and grumpy company the next morning. Even the horses weren’t in the mood to be saddled again. I’m not the most superstitious person around, but the negative omens were beginning to add up.
Asrava’s steading was not so large as ours. They had a roughly circular palisade of logs, just as we did. There were twenty or twenty-five houses and smaller buildings within, dominated by the Hospodar’s great hall. Outside the steading, the fields were dotted with more houses. My guess was that 120 to 150 people lived inside the wall, and a similar number outside.
Asrava himself waited at the gate. He stepped forward and spread his arms in welcome. He wore a voluminous grey cloak, which had seen better days, but it was pinned with a very fine gold broach. The Hospodar looked older than I expected. He had a luxurious, foot-long beard, but his long hair was a bit scraggly, and thin on top.
Gosdan dismounted first, and the two men embraced formally.
- “My son, Mushtal.” said Asrava.
I had never seen Asrava before, but his son I recognized. About a year ago, Mushtal and some companions had been trying to steal some of our sheep when we caught them at it. They fled, rather than stay to debate the matter with us.
Mushtal was an ill-favoured lout, only in his early twenties, but already prematurely bald. He always had the most curious expression on his face - as if he wasn’t quite sure what was going on, and was waiting for someone to explain it to him.
- “My boys!” shouted Gosdan. His sons dismounted, and were presented to our host. Then all of the Hands were named, including me. When Gosdan finally called my name, I felt Asrava’s eyes upon me, calculating, as if weighing me. I don’t think he was very impressed.
Our horses were led away, to be watered and fed. Some of our men, including Dirayr, would be there, to rub them down and see that they were well looked after.
Asrava’s great hall was indeed smaller than our own. But it was warm, and smoky, and smelled appealingly of roasting meat. The other powerful odours were all too familiar: wet clothing, warm bodies, wood smoke and stale beer.
Gosdan and his sons were escorted to the Hospodar’s high table. Asrava sat them at his right, and put Mushtal to his left. Mihran, Khoren and I were seated on stools behind them, with the other Hands similarly placed, off to our left.
- “A toast!” cried Asrava. “A toast! Fill your cups!”
Servants came forward to pour. Mead and ale, for the most part - but at the high table, Asrava flourished a bottle of Izumyrian wine. It was rare, in Yeseriya, and no doubt very expensive. “Saved it for a special occasion!” he shouted.
“To our guests! And to our agreement!”
I had a sip of ale, then placed the cup beneath my stool. I had seen Mihran do this before, so I took my cue from him. If this was not quite enemy territory, it certainly wasn’t home ground. I wanted my wits about me, just in case. To my surprise, Khoren also followed Mihran’s example.
More toasts followed: Gosdan to our host, Asrava to Gosdan’s sons, and then one for Mushtal. Hvadi warriors may be fearsome fighters, but they are even more ferocious drinkers.
Once the assembled company had a few drinks under their belts, and cups were re-filled, Asrava proceeded to the dramatic presentation.
- “My daughter, Garine!”
She came up the back of the high table platform, to a resounding cheer. Garine had honey-coloured hair, and a ripe body. Her face was pretty, but vacuous, like her brother’s. I wondered what kind of thoughts (if any) passed between those ears. She was attractive girl, but she obviously knew it. I swear, she was drinking in all of the attention.
- “My daughter, Noyemi!”
This girl had dark hair. She kept her head down. Modesty, I think, or perhaps shyness. She was plainer featured, her body more slender, almost boyish.
Asrava proposed a toast to his daughters, and then, finally, sat down, so that the serious drinking could begin. There was one more girl seated at the high table. Asrava was a widower, so this would be his concubine, Lulalme. I had heard that she was young, but Lulalme was a shy little doe, who looked younger than Asrava’s daughters.
We have curious customs, in Hvad. It was considered acceptable for Asrava to include his concubine in the proceedings, but not to introduce her formally; that would have been a breach of good manners.
The feast that ensued followed a predictable pattern. Drinking, bragging, and talk. Then more drinking, and eating. When stomachs were full, Asrava suggested hearing the guslar. Teeth got up, grinning, and set himself on a stool at the corner of the high table.
He recited the tale of Mher and Dzeroun, brothers in arms. Together, the two friends slaughtered thousands of their enemies, stole a herd of cattle each, then went off to get drunk together. No doubt it was Gosdan who had suggested that Teeth perform that particular epic. It left all the warriors present with warm feelings - and a great thirst, because of course no one could fill their cup while the guslar was performing.
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