Bite Me!
Copyright© 2026 by Megumi Kashuahara
Chapter 4: Eleanor’s Ghost
The château felt wrong the moment they stepped through the door.
Luna noticed it first—the way the air sat heavy and still, like the house was holding its breath. The afternoon light filtering through the windows seemed dimmer than it should be, shadows pooling in corners where they had no business being.
“Do you feel that?” she asked, setting down her suitcase.
Lucian had gone completely still in the doorway, his expression shuttered in a way she’d never seen. “Yes.”
“What is it?”
“Old magic.” His voice was flat. “Very old. And very familiar.”
A chill ran down Luna’s spine that had nothing to do with temperature. “Lucian?”
But he was already moving through the house, checking rooms with swift, economical movements. Luna followed, her exhaustion from the flight forgotten, adrenaline sharpening her senses.
Nothing looked disturbed. Nothing was out of place. And yet.
“Maybe it’s just jet lag,” she tried. “We’ve been traveling for—”
“It’s not jet lag.” Lucian stopped in the middle of the library, his hands clenched into fists. “Someone’s been here. In the house.”
“How can you tell?”
“I can smell her.”
The way he said her made Luna’s blood run cold.
“Who?”
But Lucian was already walking away, his jaw tight. “Unpack. Rest. I need to check the grounds.”
He was gone before she could argue, leaving Luna standing alone in a house that suddenly felt far too large and far too empty.
Don’t be ridiculous, she told herself. It’s an old house. Old houses feel creepy. That’s normal.
But the oppressive atmosphere didn’t lift as she climbed the stairs to the bedroom. If anything, it got worse—like walking deeper into water, pressure building with every step.
Luna unpacked mechanically, her mind still in Seoul, still on that balcony, still feeling Lucian’s lips on hers. They’d barely spoken on the flight back, both pretending to sleep, both hyperaware of every accidental touch.
One week, they’d said. The week was over. They were back in France. Back to reality.
Except reality felt like a nightmare waiting to happen.
After unpacking, restless energy drove her to explore. The château had eight bedrooms, Lucian had mentioned once. She’d only seen three. Might as well see what else her purchase had included.
The second-floor hallway stretched longer than she remembered, doors lining both sides like sentries. Most opened to dust-sheeted furniture and windows that needed cleaning. One was clearly Lucian’s study—books in languages she couldn’t read, maps that showed countries with different borders, a portrait of a stern-looking man in 18th-century dress who had Lucian’s eyes.
But it was the room at the far end of the hall that stopped her.
The door was ajar. Just slightly. Like someone had closed it but the latch hadn’t caught.
Luna pushed it open.
The room was beautiful. Clearly a woman’s sitting room—delicate furniture, a writing desk by the window, wallpaper printed with roses that had faded to the color of old tea. Unlike the other rooms, this one had been maintained. No dust sheets. No neglect.
And on the writing desk, as if waiting for her, sat a leather-bound diary.
Luna’s hand trembled as she picked it up. The leather was soft, well-worn. No name on the cover. She opened to the first page.
Eleanor Catherine Hartwell
January 1854
Her heart stopped.
Eleanor. The woman Lucian had loved. The woman who’d been murdered.
She should put it down. This was private. This was—
But her eyes had already found the first entry, and she was reading before she could stop herself.
January 15, 1854
Today I met the most extraordinary man. Lucian de Rochefort, recently arrived from Paris. He attended Father’s dinner party and spoke to me of art and philosophy as if my opinions mattered. As if I were more than just a decorative daughter to be married off.
He has the saddest eyes I’ve ever seen.
Luna sank into the chair, unable to stop reading.
The entries chronicled a courtship—tentative at first, then passionate. Eleanor’s growing love for a man who seemed haunted by sorrows she couldn’t name. Her confusion when he avoided daylight. Her worry when he wouldn’t eat at family dinners.
March 3, 1854
I told him today that I love him. He looked stricken, as if I’d wounded him. “You shouldn’t,” he said. “I’m not what you think I am.”
But I DO love him. Whatever secrets he carries, whatever darkness haunts him, I love him.
Luna’s throat tightened. She flipped ahead, pages blurring.
April 20, 1854
He told me the truth tonight. All of it. What he is. What he’s done. The centuries he’s lived.
I should be terrified. I should run.
Instead, I asked him to make me like him. To give us eternity together.
He refused. Said he wouldn’t curse me with this existence. That I deserved life, not his half-death.
I’ve never loved him more.
Tears pricked Luna’s eyes. This was her. This was exactly how she felt. The impossibility of loving someone who existed outside time.
She kept reading, faster now, watching Eleanor’s happiness bloom across the pages. Plans for a future. Talk of marriage, though it would have to be secret. Joy despite the impossibility.
And then, June 1854, the entries changed.
June 2, 1854
Someone is watching the house. I saw her yesterday in the garden—a woman in an old-fashioned gown, just standing among the roses, staring at Lucian’s window.
When I went to confront her, she was gone.
Luna’s hands started shaking.
June 5, 1854
The woman was in the house last night. I woke to find her standing at the foot of my bed, just watching me. When I screamed, she vanished like smoke.
Lucian is terrified, though he tries to hide it. He knows who she is.
He won’t tell me her name.
June 10, 1854
I hear her voice in my dreams now. She calls me “the little mortal.” She says I’m stealing what belongs to her. That Lucian is hers and always has been.
Lucian wants me to leave, to go to my sister in London. But I won’t abandon him. Not when he needs me most.
The handwriting in the next entry was shaky, rushed.
June 15, 1854
She’s in the house. Right now. I can hear her footsteps in the hallway, that rustling of her gown. Lucian went into town for supplies. He’ll be back within the hour.
I should run. I know I should run.
But I’m frozen. I can’t move. She’s calling my name.
Eleanor. Eleanor. Come out and face me, little mortal.
God help me, I should—
The entry stopped mid-sentence. The rest of the page was blank.
Luna turned the page with trembling fingers.
Nothing. The remaining pages were empty.
Because Eleanor had died that night. Whatever had happened in that final hour, she hadn’t lived to write it down.
Luna closed the diary, her heart pounding. The room suddenly felt oppressive, too small, the walls pressing in. That heavy atmosphere she’d felt since arriving—it wasn’t jet lag. It wasn’t her imagination.
It was a warning.
She stood, clutching the diary, and turned to leave.
The door slammed shut.
Luna spun around, breath catching. The door. She’d left it open. She was sure she’d left it—
“Reading Eleanor’s diary? How delightful.”
The voice came from everywhere and nowhere—cultured, French-accented, dripping with amusement.
Luna backed against the writing desk, eyes scanning the room. “Who’s there?”
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