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Whispers in the Forest

Copyright© 2025 by Jody Daniel

Chapter 8

Outside the château.

Volkov raised a fist.

The team halted so sharply and silently that the forest itself seemed to hold its breath. They dissolved into the darkness along the tree line—shapes among shapes, disciplined ghosts in black fatigues.

Before them, the trees opened into the château’s circular gravel drive. Moonlight washed the stone façade in cold silver, the windows dark, the slate roof glistening with mist. The clock tower pierced the sky like a silent sentinel—ominous, watchful. The place looked still. Peaceful.

A lie.

“Clear,” Dmitri whispered, lowering his night-vision monocular, breath fogging faintly in the cold air.

“No sentries visible.”

Volkov’s eyes narrowed on the shadowed clock tower—the spot where he assumed the main entrance would be.

“Move,” he signalled. “Two teams. Flank the entrance.”

Mistake number one.

They stepped from the forest, boots crunching faintly on loose gravel. The sound was swallowed quickly by the vastness of the night—a night thick with damp pine and yellowwood scent drifting down from the trees. They advanced with predatory precision, hugging the shadows.

They made it halfway to the clock tower when—

SH–CHUCK.

The unmistakable, spine-tightening sound of a pump-action shotgun chambering a shell.

A voice rolled out of the rose garden to their right, deep and unhurried, like granite grinding over granite:

“You boys took a wrong turn.”

Volkov spun, rifle rising.

Boetie Botha stepped from the darkness.

He looked less like a man and more like a boulder torn loose from a mountain, shoulders as broad as the doorway behind him, chest filling the space like a battering ram. The 12-gauge shotgun in his hands seemed absurdly small against him, a toy in the hands of a giant.

“Private property,” Boetie said, voice dangerously calm. “Turn around and walk away ... or you leave in a bag.”

“Drop the weapon!” Volkov barked, levelling his AK-12 compact.

Mistake number two.

Another voice floated from the right—cool, young, and sharp as broken glass.

“Bad idea,” Hannes called from the shadows of the Château’s East Wing. “Crossfire. You move, we drop you. You shoot, we drop you.”

Volkov’s heart rate didn’t change—but his mind raced.

He was exposed. Moonlit. In the open.

Two hostiles already had angles. Trained. Armed. Confident.

Not ideal.

“We are diplomatic security,” Volkov said tightly. “We are here to retrieve a national.”

Hannes scoffed. Boetie didn’t blink.

“You’re trespassing,” Boetie growled. “And on this farm, we don’t do diplomacy after dark.”

He raised the shotgun an inch.

“I’m going to count to three. If you’re not walking back by two, I open up ... One.”

Volkov weighed it in a heartbeat.

Retreat? Impossible.

Negotiate? Not with men like these.

The element of surprise? Gone.

The plan? Compromised.

But Volkov was not wired for surrender. “Flash-bang!” he roared in Russian.

Alexandru was already pulling the pin.

The canister arced through the dark—

FLASH—BANG!

White light detonated like lightning at arm’s length.

FLASH—BANG!

A second blast hammered the night, a thunderclap ripping the world apart.

Hannes fired instinctively—two sharp cracks, gravel spitting inches from Volkov’s boots.

Mistake number three.

The Russians broke for the château, running blind from the blast—but they headed straight for the clock tower.

The wrong direction.

Because the entrance wasn’t there.

The night erupted with a thunderous BOOM—Boetie’s shotgun. Dmitri jerked violently as buckshot tore into his side. He crumpled onto the gravel, a dark smear already spreading beneath him.

A 9-millimetre round hissed past Volkov’s ear, and he dove behind a rose bush—thorns tearing at his sleeves, earth cold against his chest.

Then—

T-T-THWIP.

A point 223 round slammed into the bush from behind. A near miss—too controlled to be random.

Volkov froze.

There were shooters in the rear.

He twisted slowly, lifting his night-vision optics.

Three silhouettes crouched behind a low stone wall near the château’s West Wing—rifles braced, steady, aimed right at his team.

Three behind.

Two on the flanks.

Dmitri down.

Five defenders.

Four of his men still standing.

Volkov’s jaw clenched.

He was surrounded.

He was in the open.

And the château—his objective—was still twenty agonising meters away.

For the first time that night, Volkov felt something he hadn’t felt in years:

A whisper of doubt.

And in the cold moonlight, the hunters realised — they were the ones being hunted.

From above, a voice cut through the darkness—hard and unyielding, like gravel scraped across a steel plate.

“Didn’t you read the signs on the gate?” Ruan’s voice. Calm. Cold. Absolute.
“Choice is yours. Leave your weapons and walk away ... or leave in a body bag.”

Ruan is seen on the balcony of a room on the first floor of the château. He holds a tactical shotgun in his right hand and pointing at Volkov with his left hand index finger. Behind Ruan the château stone wall and a door to the room is scene.

Volkov stiffened.

Another voice came from a different angle—high, elevated. A balcony.

Another shooter.

Now the odds were truly stacking against him.

Volkov forced a slow breath. He could no longer see shapes—only silhouettes against the flood of moonlight. But he could feel the crosshairs resting on him from multiple angles.

“We came to retrieve her highness...” he called back, trying to steady his voice. “Just release her and we will go.”

For a moment, there was silence.

Then—

A voice floated down from the balcony above, smooth as silk and sharp as a blade.

“I told you to leave me alone, Viktor.”

Princess Elena’s voice.

Volkov’s guts turned to ice.

“Your Highness,” he stammered, “I ... I am responsible for your safety, and you were abducted by this ... this—”

“By this what, Viktor?” Lena’s voice hardened, losing its softness. “I contracted Mister Venter to bring me to this château for reasons I will disclose only to the Council at Parliament.”

Volkov swallowed. Hard.

That ... was not the narrative he needed.

Before he could respond, the world erupted into blue-white brilliance.

A massive floodlight blasted to life on the château roof, flooding the entire front garden—the gravel, the rose bushes, the trembling pine shadows—with blinding radiance. Volkov’s night-vision goggles flared white-hot.

He tore them from his face with a curse, rubbing his burning eyes as the afterimage seared across his vision.

“Get up and step away from your weapons,” Hannes ordered from the east wing’s shadow. His voice was iron. “Hands above your heads.”

Volkov blinked hard, trying to focus.

He could see the silhouettes now—five defenders, all armed, all with clear angles.

He was outplayed. Outnumbered. Outmanoeuvred.

He nodded once to his men.

“Get up,” he ordered quietly. “Hands above your heads.”

Slowly—one after another—they rose from the gravel, weapons left where they lay, hands raised into the harsh light.

“Now walk toward the east wall of the château,” Ruan commanded from above.

There was no hesitation left. Volkov and his men complied, moving stiffly, stepping into the open where any twitch could be perceived as aggression.

They reached the stone wall and stood against it, the rough surface cold against their faces and front torsos.

From the west wing, three more silhouettes rose behind the low wall. The château staff—farmhands with military posture—moved confidently toward the discarded rifles, pistols, and magazines. They collected everything in seconds.

One crouched by Dmitri’s fallen body.

“Ah ... Mister Boetie,” the young man called, “this one guy is breathing, but bleeding bad.”

Boetie stepped forward, the shotgun still cradled in his massive arms, beard catching the blue floodlight like silver wire. His voice rumbled like distant thunder.

“Take him inside. Let the women attend to him.”

He shifted his grip, eyes locking on Volkov and the remaining three intruders.

“We’ll secure these trespassers.”


Boetie, Hannes, and the farmhands marched Volkov and his cronies into the kitchen, and the procession looked surreal even to me. Three hardened Russian operatives with their hands clasped on top of their heads, walking stiff-legged like cattle headed for marking, flanked by a former Springbok flank built like a granite boulder, his 12-gauge pointed at their backs, and Hannes—lean, quiet, deceptively calm—covering the rear with his Glock.

The air inside the kitchen was warm, bright, fragrant with rosemary and butter from whatever Giles had been preparing before the chaos began. The contrast felt almost obscene—like stepping from a war zone into a farmhouse Christmas. The sudden light made Volkov flinch. His men blinked like moles dragged into daylight.

Boetie shoved Volkov down into one of the heavy oak chairs at the head of the long kitchen table. The old wood creaked under the force. Hannes took position by the door, weapon held low but ready, the tight angle of his jaw telling me he was still half in DRC mode. The three farmhands—khaki, sunburned, and built like the mountains—slipped to the windows, rifles raised but steady, utterly unfazed. They were the type of men who grew up shooting jackals at night and fixing tractors at dawn. Russians didn’t impress them.

I holstered my weapon, though I kept my hand close. “Giles,” I said, nodding at our unexpected guest. “Get the Colonel a glass of water. He looks thirsty.”

Volkov stared at me while Giles silently obliged. Sweat glistened on his forehead—not from fear, but from the sudden warmth. His eyes were anything but shaken. They flickered around the room, taking in exits, sight lines, threats. Calculating. Always calculating. He wouldn’t find a weakness, not with Boetie looming behind him like a storm cloud about to break.

“You have made a grave mistake, Mr. Venter,” Volkov hissed, voice low and venomous. “Assaulting a diplomatic agent. Kidnapping a Royal. The repercussions will be ... severe. The Duke will burn this forest to the ground.”

He sounded sure of it. Too sure. But the world was about to tilt under his feet.

“Drop the script, Viktor,” Lena said.

In the kitchen of the château, the captured Colonel Volkov sits at the kitchen table as Lena walks in and quiet him down in his rage. Lena is seen stopping Volkov with her right hand held up and a soft voice telling him to stop.

Everyone turned.

She stepped out of the pantry doorway, barefoot on the cold flagstones, wearing my borrowed jeans and the oversized T-shirt. Her ginger hair was now wind dry, curled slightly at the ends, and she looked nothing like a Crown Princess—yet everything like one. The way she held her shoulders, the quiet certainty in her posture ... it shifted the atmosphere. Even the farmhands straightened.

She carried the wooden box in her hands. The Guardian. She placed it on the table in front of Volkov.

He saw the crest burned into the lid and his confidence cracked—just a flicker in the eyes, but I caught it. He knew what it was. Or feared what it might contain.

“You think you are loyal,” Lena said softly, evenly. “You think you serve the Kingdom. You think you serve a Duke who saved us from total collapse. Think again.”

She opened the box.

Her movements were slow, deliberate, the sort that made a grown man hold his breath.

“I am going to show you who you really serve.”

She removed the Red Letter and two of the deeds. The ancient paper made a dry, brittle rustle that somehow filled the room, echoing louder than gunfire. She slid them across the table so they rested inches from his fingers.

“Read it,” she said. “Read it, Colonel. And tell me if a patriot writes letters to Lavrentiy Beria.”

Volkov stared at the paper like it was a coiled cobra. As if touching it might sink fangs into his career, his identity—his loyalty.

“Read it!” Lena snapped.

It was the first time I’d ever heard her voice crack like a whip. Even Boetie grunted softly in approval.

Volkov lowered his eyes.

He read the header. Then the first line.

“To Comrade Beria...”

The colour drained from his face. Not fear—shock. The shock of a man watching his world-view tilt and fall off the table. He read the rest in silence. His breath hitched when he reached the signature.

Ivan Zoryanovich.

His hands trembled.

“This...” he whispered. “This is a forgery.”

“The paper is eighty years old,” I said from the corner. “The ink is period. And the seal is authentic. We found it inside the Guardian.”

He looked at his men—one injured, two confused, one trying to vanish into the shadows. Alexandru met his eyes and shook his head slightly, lost.

“He sold them,” Volkov murmured, voice cracking. “He sold the King to the butchers.”

“And his grandson is doing the same thing,” Lena said. “Selling Volynia to his cronies. Using you to keep a stolen throne.”

She leaned forward, placing her palms flat on the table. Her eyes were unwavering.

“You have a choice, Colonel. You can be the man who drags me back to a traitor so I can be silenced ... or you can be the man who helps me take my country back.”

The kitchen went quiet.

The kind of quiet you only hear in the mountains at night—wind through pines, far-off crickets, the crackle of the old Aga stove somewhere in or around the château structures.

Volkov didn’t move. Didn’t speak. Didn’t blink. He was still in charge of the Royal Guard – about one hundred men and women. He had the power to swing the vote. He still has the ear of the General, the head of the Volynia Defence Force.

He stared at the letter and the land deeds, and I saw something I never expected: the slow collapse of a lifetime’s loyalty. It broke him—not loudly, not dramatically, but in the smallest of ways. A breath. A sagging of the shoulders. A soft curse under his breath.

Then, carefully—as though handling scripture—he folded the letter. Perfectly aligned edges. No creases out of place. He placed it back in the box together with the deeds and closed the lid.

When he lifted his head, his eyes had changed.

The fury was gone. Replaced by something cold. Something sharpened.

“My oath,” Volkov said, voice steady as stone, “is to the Crown. Not the Regent.”

He stood.

Boetie tensed, shotgun rising slightly, but Volkov didn’t even glance his way. He straightened his jacket with the dignity of a man rediscovering his spine.

He looked at Lena—and bowed. Deeply. Correctly.

The bow of a soldier to his monarch.

“Your Majesty,” he said.

Then he lifted his chin. Met her gaze.

“What are your orders, Your Royal Grace?”


City of Velyngrad, Volynia about an hour later.

Nestled in a narrow river valley beneath the Văldani Foothills, the capital city of Volynia—Velyngrad—transforms dramatically when winter arrives. By late December, the city is draped in a deep hush, as if snow has softened not only the streets but the very pace of life.

Velyngrad’s skyline is a mixture of gingerbread-roofed medieval buildings, neoclassical government halls, and slender copper-domed towers that patina to a pale green under the icy air.

In mid-winter, rooftops are piled with snow so evenly they resemble thick quilts. Icicles cling to every eave, catching pale sunlight and refracting it into tiny rainbows, while chimneys send up slow, lazy spirals of woodsmoke that linger in the still air.

The Old Quarter, with its labyrinth of cobbled lanes, becomes especially enchanting—gas lamps cast amber pools of light on the fresh snow, and the ornate wrought-iron balconies appear frosted like pastries.

Daylight is weak and silvery, barely rising above the hills by mid-morning. The River Vantrel, which divides the city, often freezes solid, its surface turning into a popular skating ribbon lined with evergreen boughs. Nights are profound—so quiet that the crunch of a single pair of boots can echo through an entire street.

A faint scent of pine logs and mulled honey wine hangs in the air, carried from the hearths and vendors’ stalls clustered around the public squares.

The Winter Lantern Festival fills the central square with glowing paper lanterns shaped like stags, wolves, and mythical Volynian spirits. Market stalls sell roasted chestnuts, spiced plum tea, and hand-carved wooden charms. Families stroll bundled in thick embroidered wool coats—Volynian patterns of deep red and midnight blue standing out against the white landscape.

Children build elaborate snow-forts in the parks, while elders gather in teahouses whose fogged windows spill warm golden light into the cold streets.

Among the landmarks that take on a special magic in winter is Palatul Coroanei Vechi, the royal residence—or Palace of the Old Crown—which looks like a frozen waterfall: its marble steps glazed with frost, and its grand façade illuminated in cool blue light.

 
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