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Los Cuatro

Copyright© 2025 by Art Samms

Chapter 1

Flying into the Rio Grande Valley felt like descending into a haze. The land flattened into a patchwork of scrub and citrus, the airport small enough to remind me of the ones I’d flown into for soccer tournaments as a teenager. Harlingen wasn’t technically in Brownsville, but it was close enough for someone traveling light. My backpack was the first off the belt, which felt like a small blessing. The kind that shouldn’t matter but still did.

The Uber vehicle smelled faintly of sweat and coconut-scented air freshener. The driver didn’t say much—just tapped his phone once to confirm my hotel and turned up the Tejano music, leaving me to watch the terrain blur past. Flat land. Power lines. A few low-slung strip malls. Palm trees here and there, trying to look natural in the heat. Everything felt sun-bleached and still.

It was my first time in Brownsville. I was only supposed to be here for the weekend, helping out with a housing initiative connected to the nonprofit I sometimes volunteered with back in Salt Lake. Fixing roofs, clearing brush, delivering donated supplies—whatever they needed. A long weekend of sweating and hammering and sleeping in unfamiliar sheets. I’d done it before. It wasn’t supposed to be anything memorable.

The hotel was what I expected—modest, low-budget, with stucco walls and a receptionist who barely looked up from her tablet. My room had an air conditioner that rattled like it was fighting for its life. Still, it was clean. I dropped my backpack on the second bed, washed my face, and checked my phone. No texts. No voicemails. No missed calls.

I stared at the screen for a second longer than I needed to. Then I shoved it in my pocket. I hadn’t eaten since Dallas, and I figured I could use some fresh air. The park wasn’t far—a fifteen-minute walk, maybe less. Close to the Rio Grande. I remembered seeing it on the map while half-dozing through the flight. There was something strange about being so close to a border I’d only ever read about in the news. A thin blue line on a map. A river and a fence.

I left the hotel just as the light began to turn gold. Early evening. Warm breeze. The kind of weather that made you feel like maybe things could be okay, even when they weren’t. I passed a couple of convenience stores, a small taco stand with two men laughing loudly at a plastic table, and then the sidewalk curved into the edge of the park.

It wasn’t crowded—just a few people scattered across benches, a woman jogging with earbuds in, a group of kids kicking a soccer ball near a patch of dry grass. A younger woman sitting on a bench, scribbling something in a tattered notebook. The river wasn’t visible from where I was standing, but I could sense it nearby. A slow, hidden presence beyond the trees.

I took a path lined with low shrubs and followed it past a rusting playground, the kind with a chipped slide and a fading shade cover. The sun was lower now, throwing long shadows across the dirt.

That’s when I saw them.

Three young women in their twenties walking together, laughing softly, their voices carrying through the warm air, maybe two hundred feet away. One of them was the girl I’d seen writing in a notebook minutes earlier. I probably wouldn’t have noticed them—wouldn’t have thought twice—except that something changed in a heartbeat.

The laughter stopped. Their posture stiffened. And then—a van. Too fast. Too close. And before I fully registered what was happening, they were screaming.

I didn’t hesitate. I ran toward them, instinctively.

The van screeched to a halt half on the path, half in the grass—no markings, white, dented along the side. The back doors flew open before it even stopped moving.

Two men jumped out. One had a gun. The other had something in his hand—I couldn’t tell what, maybe a Taser or a knife. I stopped in my tracks ... I couldn’t move for half a second. My brain froze, trying to file the scene into something it recognized. A prank? A film shoot?

But it wasn’t that. It was real. Too real.

The three women stumbled backward, startled into stillness. One of them—taller, with straight dark hair and a pink top—put herself in front of the other two without even thinking. The man with the gun raised it just enough to let her know: Don’t.

I didn’t think. I didn’t decide. I just shouted.

“Hey!”

All four of them turned toward me—three with fear, one with rage.

“Back off!” I yelled, taking a step forward, hands raised. “What the hell are you doing?”

The man with the gun turned his aim on me. The other man grabbed one of the women—she screamed, kicked. The tall one in front tried to pull her back, fists flying, and got shoved hard enough to fall.

I heard myself yell again—no real words, just a noise, pure panic and fury. With the gun no longer pointed at me, I resumed running in their direction.

A third man appeared—must’ve been driving. He came from around the van, grabbed the woman on the ground by the arm and yanked her up. She fought—God, she fought—even bit his wrist, kicked his shin.

I was almost on the scene.

Then the man with the gun stepped into my path.

He didn’t fire. But he didn’t need to. The muzzle was pointed straight at my chest.

¡Alto!” he barked. “No te muevas, cabrón.

I stopped. My breath punched out of me. I held up both hands. I spoke very little Spanish, but the gun aimed at me got its message across fluently.

“Okay, okay. Look, I don’t want trouble—just let them go.”

He stepped closer. I saw his face for the first time—maybe late twenties, sunburned, jaw tight. He didn’t look angry. He looked focused. Like this was just another job.

Ya viste demasiado, ” he said flatly.

“You don’t have to do this,” I said. “Just go. I won’t say anything.”

He didn’t respond. He raised the gun slightly and motioned with his head. I didn’t understand right away.

Then someone came up behind me and shoved something sharp against my lower back. A voice I hadn’t heard yet—quiet, hard—said, “Hands. Behind. Now.”

My stomach dropped. I hesitated. The hesitation was what did me in.

Something cracked across the back of my head—maybe the butt of a pistol, maybe just a fist—and the world lurched sideways. My knees buckled. I went down hard, face scraping gravel. Hands grabbed my arms, zip-tied my wrists with brutal efficiency.

I heard the girls shouting again—no, pleading. Tires spinning in the grass. Doors slamming. The sound of bodies struggling.

And then—darkness. The smell of oil and rubber. The floor of a van, cold and metal beneath me.

Someone said, “Let’s go.” The engine roared to life. And just like that—we were gone.

The van jolted forward, and my shoulder slammed against the wheel well. I gritted my teeth against the pain, blinked through the stars in my vision.

Someone was crying. Someone else was breathing fast—panicked, shallow gasps.

I tried to lift my head, but my balance was shot. The world was still spinning from the hit to my skull. I forced my eyes open, squinting in the dim interior light of the van.

The three women were on the floor with me—crowded, zip-tied, breathing hard. One of them was crying, shoulders shaking silently. The tallest, the feisty one who’d tried to fight back, was staring at the back doors like she was memorizing the welds in the hinges. The third young woman, the quiet one, was completely still, hugging her knees, wide-eyed, her breath fogging the cold metal wall beside her.

No one spoke.

The van rattled along what sounded like a dirt road, tires grinding over rock and dust. I tried to work my wrists, but the plastic tie dug in tighter. My hands were going numb.

“What the hell is happening,” I murmured. I didn’t mean to say it out loud. It just came out, hoarse and stunned.

The tall, feisty woman turned to me. Her eyes narrowed, like she was trying to place me. “You were in the park.”

“Yeah,” I said. “I saw ... I tried to—”

“Stupid,” she muttered. Not angry, exactly. Just ... exhausted. “You should’ve walked away.”

“I couldn’t.”

She exhaled and looked away.

The van hit a pothole. One of the ladies whimpered. The feisty one shifted closer to her, nudging her shoulder, trying to calm her without using her hands.

I swallowed hard. My mouth tasted like dirt and blood. “Where are they taking us?”

“Mexico,” the quiet one whispered. Her voice was small. Distant.

Her tall friend shot her a look. “You don’t know that.”

“Yes, I do,” replied the other, as her eyes stayed fixed on the floor. “They weren’t speaking English. And I saw the plates.”

I felt a sharp stab of cold in my chest. “The border’s right there,” I said. “We could already be—”

“Yeah,” the third woman said, voice shaking. “We could be anywhere now.”

We fell silent again.

I heard a phone buzz up front. One of the men laughed at something. The van swerved slightly, correcting itself.

The tall one glanced at me again. “What’s your name?”

“Brendan. Brendan Jensen.”

She nodded slowly. “I’m Marisol Castillo. That’s my younger sister Luz, and our cousin Isa Rodriguez.”

“Short for Isabella,” Isa explained. “Everyone calls me Isa.”

“Are you okay?” I asked them, addressing the group.

Isa shook her head. “No.” Then she added, “But thanks for asking.”

I wanted to say something helpful, something reassuring, but nothing fit the moment. I was a software engineer from Salt Lake City, zip-tied in the back of a van barreling through God-knows-where with three strangers. Nothing in my life had prepared me for this.

All I could think was ... someone is going to realize we’re gone. Someone’s going to look for us. But even as I thought it, I knew the truth. It could be days before anyone even noticed.

Meanwhile, they kept on driving. Driving for what felt like forever.

I lost track of time in the back of that van. With no windows and no idea where we were headed, every bump in the road, every turn, every sudden stop or acceleration sent a new wave of dread through me.

At one point, we passed over something that sounded like a metal grate, then slowed. A murmur of voices outside—Spanish, quick and clipped. I caught a word here and there—nada que declarar, todo limpio, adelante. Then we moved again.

My gut twisted. We were across. Nobody said it out loud, but we all knew.

I looked at Marisol. Her jaw clenched, lips pressed into a flat line. Isa had stopped crying, but she rocked slightly with every curve in the road, like her body was trying to soothe itself. Luz still hadn’t spoken again. She just watched me with those big, glassy eyes, like I might suddenly know something that could save us.

The van picked up speed. The road changed—less paved, more jarring. We hit a stretch of nothing but rocks and dirt. My head smacked against the wall more than once, and I could feel a trickle of something sticky in my hair where I’d been hit.

I tried to breathe through it. Tried to focus.

Then, just as abruptly as it had started—it stopped.

Brakes screeched. The engine cut. We jolted forward as the vehicle came to a hard stop on uneven ground. Dust billowed in through a gap somewhere near the rear door.

The back latch clicked. We all tensed.

The doors opened wide. Sunset spilled in—orange and bloody. We were somewhere rural. I saw dirt, scrub, and in the distance, a flat-roofed structure that looked like a house or an old warehouse, walls faded and cracked. Barbed wire ran along a fence just beyond it. There were no city lights. No cars. No one coming.

“Out,” said a voice. Same one who’d hit me. He had a cigarette now, hanging from his lip.

Two of them pulled us out one at a time. I stumbled and landed hard on my knees. Marisol caught herself. Luz and Isa were dragged by the arms when they hesitated. We were herded like livestock across a patch of hard-packed earth toward the structure.

They didn’t shout. They didn’t curse or threaten. That scared me more. These guys were calm. Practiced.

Inside, the building smelled like mildew and something chemical—maybe bleach. The front room was empty except for a folding table, a few chairs, and a stained couch with springs poking through the fabric. One bulb flickered above us.

Marisol leaned close and whispered to me, “Don’t do anything stupid again. Not until we know where we stand.”

 
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