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Immaculate

Copyright© 2025 by Daelyx Len Auphydas

Chapter 5: Frost and Fish

“Keep your thumbs clear of the saw!” Antares instructs, while Alunya studiously drags the copper sawblade up and down through the ice.

It’s a few weeks after the solstice, now, and after an intermittent spell of clear weather following the first snowstorm a few weeks earlier, another cold front had moved in from the southwest and ensured the land remained blanketed in snow, as well as freezing the surface of the river. This was the main river not far from the village, much deeper and wider than the little stream the two had swam in last fall.

“Like this?” Alunya asks, hesitantly, trying to hold the saw like his big brother had shown him while cutting out a circular disk of ice from the top of the river. It was hard work, especially since they were just kids, but with some effort eventually Alunya connects the cut back to where he had started, leaving a jagged, vaguely polygonal chunk of ice- it was not very thick, and Reia had forbidden they go out onto the surface of the ice as a result, but that at least made it easier to cut.

“There, good job! Now we just need to wait for a fish to swim by. The cold water makes them slow and sluggish, so they’re easier to hit.” Antares instructs, tossing Alunya a spear before laying down near his own hole in the ice. Although Reia had told him not to go onto the water, he is still lightweight enough that he reasons it would be fine.

Antares shows Alunya how to hold and thrust with the spear, and then they lay down and wait, Alunya imitating Antares as he prowls over the icy sheets. It is slow going, as Alunya blinks staring down into the dark, frigid waters.

Alunya clenches his jaw, doing his best to remain focused through the long wait. The cold slowly seeps through his clothes, and laying still there is making the boy progressively more and more tired, such that when a fish finally does come by the gap in the ice, Alunya had practically nodded off and didn’t respond fast enough to even attempt a strike before the quarry vanished again.

Alunya shakes his head in frustration and blinks his eyes, trying to rouse himself back to full consciousness. C’mon, you wanna learn how to fish, don’t you? Alunya hefts his spear again and narrows his eyes, trying once again to keep focused. Eventually another fish does swim through and Alunya strikes, but it’s like the spear warps as it enters the water and diverts below the fish. Alunya gawks in dismay. What? But I was right on!

“The water shifts your view of the fish, it’s deeper than it looks.” Antares advises. “Here, let me show you-” He creeps over to where Alunya is—A safer spot than Antares’ hole, perched on a rock next to the fishing hole. Antares guides Alunya’s hands, and prods at the river bed. “See? Look how far down we have to reach to find the bottom.” It is deep indeed, and as Antares pointed out Alunya can see the shaft of the spear does indeed look like it’s at a different angle than where it entered.

“Woah...” Alunya murmurs, entranced. Ari is so smart!

Antares cocks his head to the side, so that he can speak in Alunya’s ear directly while still guiding his arms. “You want me to show you?” Antares asks, and Alunya nods emphatically.

The two of them take up position on either side of the little water hole, and the next time a fish swims by, Antares strikes. From Alunya’s perspective it looks like he is aiming below his target, but instead it strikes the fish in the fin. The fire-hardened spear point isn’t very good at keeping the fish though, and although it was a solid thrust the fish manages to slip off the spearpoint and flutter away in a mist of blood.

“Darn!” Antares complains, scratching his head and sitting back. Woah, he hit it on the first try! Big brother is so talented! Alunya claps, enthralled.

“Yay! My turn!” Alunya picks up his spear again and creeps over near the edge of the ice.

Antares shrugs. “Yeah, I guess that’s enough of a show.” He says sheepishly. Alunya frowns. Why is he upset? He hit it right on, it was just bad luck.

It was a bit of a longer wait, and the two of them idly chatter on about different things; The new chores they’d done last fall, mostly. That dialogue went on for some time, with Antares doing most of the talking, but Alunya still has some to share. “ ... Mom’s been showing me how to mend clothes!” Alunya boasts. “Maybe once I learn how, I can make something cute for you to wear?”

Antares sputters at the suggestion, as if he was choking—at a bad time, since a fish had just entered his field of view, and by the time he’d recentered and struck it was already gone.

The splash of his spear entering the water startles the fish and it darts further along under the ice sheets, right past the other hole where Alunya is waiting. Alunya promptly strikes, aiming like his brother had told him, nailing the fish down to the riverbed. He blinks, startled at his own success, not knowing what to do next. I got it! I did just what Antares said and I got it! Ari is such a good teacher.

Antares looks up, startled, to see Alunya had somehow caught the fish he had missed. How is he such a quick learner? I haven’t even caught one fish yet! Still, he doesn’t seem to know how to retrieve it, so Antares rushes over to his side, reaching into the frigid water to take a firm grasp of the fish and haul it up out of the water.

Alunya watches in some awe while Antares holds up a knife and quickly runs it through the fish above the skull, wincing at the spurt of blood. It is not the most pleasant experience, but Alunya seems positively enthralled while Antares works, so Antares explains what he was doing. “You just cut it open here to kill it, then you place the knife here...” Antares runs the knife in between the ribs on its ventral side. “ ... Then you draw the blade up to its gills, here.” Antares makes sure Alunya can see while he draws the blade up, releasing the guts and viscera of the fish.

With a few more steps, he finished processing it and stashes it in the snow, where the cold would keep it fresh enough. “When did you learn to do all of that, Ari?” Alunya asks, wondrously.

Antares scratches the back of his head, a little embarrassed. Although he’d acted like he knew what he was doing, in truth he’d just gotten most of what he knew from watching the men and other boys fishing while he was out doing laundry or other chores. “Ehrm, just picked it up here and there, haha.” Antares pronounces, not wanting to directly admit he’d never actually caught a fish before.

Alunya nods. “Ok, but next time you gotta let me try!” Antares nods back in acquiescence, and they return to their individual fishing holes.

[... ]

“Wow Antares, you caught such a big fish!” Alunya gawks as he lifts the largest partially-butchered fish on the back of the sled he is sitting on, while Antares grunts from the effort of pulling the sled forwards. Between the two of them, they had caught five fish total—Three from Antares, two from Alunya—way more than enough to be worth the time and energy expended on their day out.

Antares huffs with effort as he drags the sled, Alunya peeking out from on top of the sled curiously. “Do you need my help, Ari?”

Antares shakes his head stubbornly, trying his best to put on a strong face. “Nu-uh, I got it! It’s just a little farther and then we can be home.” He insists, as he strains to drag the simple wooden sled up the hill.

 
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