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Immaculate

Copyright© 2025 by Daelyx Len Auphydas

Chapter 13: Snowfall

2892 P.C., the first of Winter, Hylicia’s Vale.

Unlike the other seasonal festivals, the winter solstice was not an occasion for feasting and the village to get together; The cold meant going outside is not the most appealing, and food had to be conserved to last until spring. Instead, fires lit every home and households celebrated in a more humble way, proportionate to their means.

But to Alunya, the day holds little joy as he beholds the outside gloomily.

“What’s wrong, Alunya?” Reia asks, lightly placing one hand on his shoulder and looking down at him. Alunya looks back up at her indignantly.

“Theres no snow! It’s supposed to snow in winter!” Aluna protests, pointing outside. It’s true; despite the weather having gotten colder, there had not been a hint of snow, merely frigid overcast skies.

Reia kneels down next to Alunya, glancing outside. Truthfully, the lack of snow was preferable to her, but she still wanted to say something to make her son feel better. “There there, I’m sure there will be snow in short order. It’s just the first day of winter.”

Alunya didn’t seem particularly cheered up, but Antares, who had just gotten out of bed and left the bedroom he shared with Alunya, traipsed into the room, surveying the outside from behind his mother and brother. Seeing the glum mood his brother was in, he places a hand on his shoulder. “Hey, Alunya, I know a place we can go, but only while it’s not snowing.” Antares offers.

“Oh, no you don’t! We need firewood for the winter, and it’s better to chop it before it’s all icy outside!” Reia interrupts Antares.

Alunya’s pout gets even bigger, and he tugs on Reia’s tunic, looking up at her with the big doe eyes he had mastered for when he wanted to get his way. “Aw, mooom! C’mon, he’s busy enough the rest of the year! Won’t you let him show me?” Reia looks down at Alunya, and then away, as if flustered.

“I mean ... I ... Oh, alright, fine. But you had better not stay out too long, you two!” Reia finally lets out, caving almost immediately.

Alunya pumps his fist, triumphantly. “Yessss! C’mon Antares, what were you going to show me?”

Antares watches the interaction between the two of them with something resembling contempt, shooting both of them a dark look before responding. “Just, follow me, I’ll show you.”

Alunya looks up at him, questioningly, but he would receive no answer as Antares opens the door and stalks off. Alunya glances back up at Reia, who shrugs, before he takes off after his brother. “Big bro, wait for me!”


Alunya jogs after Antares, catching up with him as he enters the village at a brisk pace. “Where are we going, Ari?” Alunya questions, taking hold of his brother’s hand just to keep him from walking off again.

Antares huffs. “Just you wait, you’ll see it soon enough.” Antares looks back forwards for a moment before looking back at Alunya, his expression softening. “ ... You’ll like it. Well, I mean, I think you will, anyways...” He trails off with significantly less certainty than he had started with.

Alunya nods eagerly, wondering what it could be. A flight of fanciful ideas flash through his head- Did his brother make a treefort? Maybe he’d taken down a vicious monster or found a magic sword? Alunya quickens his pace as he continues thinking up increasingly fantastical and unrealistic possibilities.

Antares struggles to keep pace as Alunya bursts first into a brisk walk and then into a jog, dragging Antares along. “Hey, you know, I’m the one showing you where to go!” Antares protests dryly, as he yanks back on Alunya’s arm, who had tried to just scamper off forwards towards the town center instead of off around the corner where Antares was trying to go.

The pair cross the village, heading down to where the river bisects the village near the center then crossing the ancient stone bridge to the other, less populated side of the village, and up to the rocky ridge, where Antares motions for Alunya to follow as he treads off the beaten path.

“C’mon, it’s just up here!” Antares points forward as he weaves through the underbrush, until they come upon a large boulder striking up from the ridge, which Antares climbs up onto, offering a hand down to Alunya, who promptly ignores it and just jumps up to the rock lip where he scrambles over the edge. As he stands up on the monolithic precipice, his eyes widen while Antares watches his reaction.

“Woah...” Aluna murmurs, taking in the view. From that place he can see the entire village from a perspective he never had before, perfectly framed with the mountain in the background and the river just before the village. With the forest stretching past beyond them, it looks small by comparison. He had never had such a high vantage point to look out from in his life, so the experience was entirely novel to the boy.

Antares breathes a sigh of relief that Alunya likes the view. “It’s nice, right?” Antares dangles his legs off the edge and scoots up next to his brother. “I come up here sometimes when I want a spot of peace and quiet.” A flicker of doubt crosses Antares’ heart as he realizes that he had just let his very energetic, very not-peace-and-quiet brother know where to find him in those times.

Alunya smiles brightly, and after he has taken in the view fully, he turns to the side and takes Antares’s hand in his own, silver eyes shining vividly as he looks into his brothers. “It’s really pretty! Thank you for showing me, brother!”

Antares blinks, and the feeling of doubt vanishes as he warmly smiles back at Alunya. “No problem, I’m glad you like it.”

 
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