Preface

This is not a complete story. I’ve had this idea in my head for a while now and I’ve been hoping to give it away to somebody who could actually write it.

This was supposed to start off as just a bunch of bullet point paragraphs that encompass the story. From there, it kinda kept growing as I felt I needed more explanation. The whole thing will still need quite a lot of work from dialogue to world building. I have also purposely named as few of the characters in there as I possibly could so it would not get too confusing.

With all of that being said, the grammar is really bad. I have never been very book-smart and English was always my worst subject. This entire thing was written with voice to text on an iPad. I’ve tried to go back and catch any words that were written down incorrectly, but I’m sure that there’s quite a few left over.

If anyone wishes to use all or part of this story, I give it away freely. If somebody actually writes a completed version of this and wants me to take down the original, I would also be more than happy to.

I am fairly embarrassed about how much it screams amateur. I know it has a lot of problems. POV changes, even within the same paragraph, and the flow might make it difficult to read. If anybody wishes to discuss the story plot itself, I am more than happy to, but at this point the grammar is what it is.