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The Mahabharata Retold: The Thumb Clause

Copyright© 2025 by Tantrayaan

Author's Note

Author’s Note

I grew up loving the stories of the Mahabharata. I first heard them from my paati (grandmother) and then lived them through the pages of the immortal works of Anant Pai and his publishing house - Amar Chitra Katha. To be honest, I believe it is the greatest story ever told to date.

I wanted to share this passion with my son, but he couldn’t connect with the ancient kings and palaces. So, I tried something different. I asked myself: what would these stories look like if they happened today?

This story is a modern version of one of the Mahabharata’s most powerful episodes: the story of Eklavya.


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In the original, Eklavya was a bright, determined young prince from a small tribe. He was denied formal training by the great guru Dronacharya, who taught the royal princes. Undeterred, Eklavya built a statue of Drona, treated it as his teacher, and through sheer devotion and self-study, became an archer of incredible skill. When Drona discovered this, he was astounded with his skill. While he was proud of the boy, he was afraid that his remarkable skill would surpass that of his star student - the brave and mighty Arjuna.

He asked for a “guru’s fee” (dakshina - a customary but essential gift that a student gave his teacher at the end of his training): Eklavya’s right thumb. This was to ensure his star pupil, Arjuna, remained the greatest archer. Eklavya, ever devoted, complied without hesitation and faded from the story.

 
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