Any and all criticisms, suggestions, corrections or comments are welcome.
My book can be found on www.vincentbergauthor.com (my older sites, vincentberg.com and crumblywriter.net were both compromised and are not longer valid nor trustworthy). The stories are no longer posted to my websites, and given my recent health issues, the website doesn't get updated very often either, so it's generally best to: 1) buy directly from Bookapy, 2) search for my books on either Amazon, Smashwords or via Internet search across various sites.
As usual, the books have a LOT more formatting than the posted stories do, plus Bookapy and Smashwords offer a lot more eBook formats than Amazon offers.
All of my stories are completed and fully edited before posting, and I always post on a regular basis (although the frequency varies between books).