New author, reader of erotic stories for years, figured I'd try to write one or two. Please give me feedback so I can improve my writing and my characters.
In my writing I'd like to stick to what I've experienced personally. So many of the stories around are a little out of reality. The first time you try something, it's going to be clumsy, wierd, and maybe not what you wanted or expected. Most guys don't sport 11 inch dicks, and for some reason I've never understood, a lot of rape and non-con stories find the victim enjoying it after a minute, which is something I find hard to believe.
I think honesty is a good part of any tale, both from the storyteller and the reader. If you like or dislike something I've written, please email me. I promise I'll respond to everything. Or if you just want to drop a line, that's fine too.
Details:
20 y/o
Full time student
Perth, Australia
In my writing I'd like to stick to what I've experienced personally. So many of the stories around are a little out of reality. The first time you try something, it's going to be clumsy, wierd, and maybe not what you wanted or expected. Most guys don't sport 11 inch dicks, and for some reason I've never understood, a lot of rape and non-con stories find the victim enjoying it after a minute, which is something I find hard to believe.
I think honesty is a good part of any tale, both from the storyteller and the reader. If you like or dislike something I've written, please email me. I promise I'll respond to everything. Or if you just want to drop a line, that's fine too.
Details:
20 y/o
Full time student
Perth, Australia
