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mrfriendly8181 ๐Ÿšซ
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Not looking for epic or book length stories. Looking for ~20 chapters at most, fully completed, with romance as well as cheating girlfriend/wife - I like stories where the MC is betrayed, overcomes it, and finds love/moves on. I've read pretty much everything Stangstar has written, same with Bebop3, quite a few other authors as well. Prefer nothing historical or science fiction/fantasy. Anything sports related is a plus.

Thanks in advance

Pixy ๐Ÿšซ

@mrfriendly8181

20 pages is like a chapter- 8K words and 40KB in size.... Not exactly long....

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mrfriendly8181 ๐Ÿšซ

@Pixy

I meant more in terms of chapters, like 20 chapters

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Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@mrfriendly8181

I meant more in terms of chapters, like 20 chapters

There's a huge variance in chapter lengths.

There's a big difference between 20 2KW chapters and 20 10KW chapters.

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mrfriendly8181 ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

Let me see if I can clarify it for you then. I don't want a gigantic story like A True History by Starfleet Carl or Home for Horny Monsters by Annabelle Hawthorne. Not a comment or judgement on quality. I am looking for works similar in length and quality to the authors I mentioned in my original post - Stangstar and Bebop3, let me add Jay Cantrell into that as well. Merely Players by Bebop3 is 48,489 words, Twice Bitten (also by Bebop3) is 52,589 words. Stangstar has stories that range from 25k to 92k words. Those would be the sweet spots I am looking for in a new author. However Jay Cantrell has written stories that vary from 20,000 words to 800,000 words. I would take a glance at books of that length as long as they are complete and don't have sequels.

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StarFleet Carl ๐Ÿšซ

@mrfriendly8181

a gigantic story like A True History by Starfleet Carl

It resembles that remark. :)

Although I have a LONG way to go to catch up with Greg, Tefler, or Roust ...

mrfriendly8181 ๐Ÿšซ

@StarFleet Carl

Yeah, I am incredibly impressed by how prolific you and some of the authors are. I've vowed to never read an incomplete story again - online or off. Unfortunately, I've been burned too many times and I want to hold off on reading something that isn't finished. Not that I think that you or George RR Martin are going to keel over next week but I'd rather hedge my bets. Nothing worse, as a reader, than never knowing how something ends.

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StarFleet Carl ๐Ÿšซ

@mrfriendly8181

Nothing worse, as a reader, than never knowing how something ends.

Other than using your own imagination ... yeah. Technically, I could say the Honorverse by David Weber hasn't ended.

And since my momma told me if I can't say anything good about someone, don't say anything at all. David Fucking Flatcat Stealing Tribble Shitter Gerrold and the War against the Chtorr, that started when I was in HIGH SCHOOL, fifty LONG YEARS ago, and just left it HANGING with vague and completely empty PROMISES ...

*cough*

Oh, sorry.

Replies:   Paladin_HGWT  Mushroom
Paladin_HGWT ๐Ÿšซ

@StarFleet Carl

I have had the pleasure of chatting with Mr. Weber several times. Mostly about subjects other than his Honor Harrington books.

I postulate that the 14 (~15) books "officially" about Honor Harrington are in effect 5 Trilogies. Each group of books tells a completed story; and similar to the anthologies, and some other series are set in what is called the Honorverse" but is really just a period of history of the star kingdom of Manticore.

Books 1-3 (On Basilisk Station, Honor of the Queen, and Short Victorious War) complete a "hero's journey" from XO to confident and respected Captain. The prelude of proxy wars ends with the collapse (revolution) of the Republic of Haven.

Books 4-6 (Field of Dishonor, Flag in Exile, and Honor Among Enemies) could be completely independent of the 1st trilogy. These 3 books focus much more on Steadholder Harrington and her "noble" obligations, as well as a personal vendetta and the consequences of perusing it. "Officially" Honor is not serving as an officer of the RMN, and is in "exile" status. The second stage of a prelude to war is occurring with several sub-plots as revolutionary Haven rebuilds. The end of 6th book wraps up most of these threads; the series could have ended here.

Books 7 to 9 (In Enemy Hands, Echoes of Honor and Ashes of Victory) are my least favorite. Books 7 & 8 are a duology of Honor becoming a POW, her adventures and eventual escape. I thought the "issues" of romantic feelings causing Honor to "go away" are contrived. Book 9 Honor is a secondary character. Main events are the Coup in the Havenite Republic and those characters.

Books 10 & 11 (War of Honor and At All Costs) beginning 5 years after book 9, these 2 books are a duology of the full-scale war between the Kingdom of Manticore and the Republic of Haven. {Weber originally wrote that Honor Harrington died in the climatic battle; intending her Son to become the MC of the series to follow.}

Books 12, 13* & 14 (Mission of Honor, A Rising Thunder, Uncompromising Honor) is a trilogy (originally book 13 was supposed to be 2 separate books). Superficially the war between the Kingdom of Manticore and the Solarian League; but is actually realization of the Mesan threat. Originally, Weber had planned that the series would continue with a new generation of characters combating the Mesan plotline.

The anthologies and the Saganami Island books have tie-ins to the above books but are not essential to the plotlines. Readers keep wanting More of the Honorverse and Honor Harrington in particular. Mr. Weber is delivering what his readers want.

"And They Lived Happily Ever After." is a fine way to end a story. Of course, it is not the end of those characters' lives/adventures. Sequels may be great or terrible, they are rarely necessary to complete a story.

There are more than dozen novels written by Frank Baum about the world of Oz. The Wizard of Oz is a great story. The 1939 film has a satisfying conclusion.

Back to the Future is a great movie, and has a satisfying conclusion (even with the tease ending). I enjoyed the trilogy, but I would have been happy with only the first movie too.

I often wish there was MORE written about the characters/worlds written by some of my favorite authors. If they are well written. It is one of the reasons I read decent fan fiction.

I wish that more books in the Sacketts series were written by Louis L'Amour. I would have enjoyed a book or books about the 4th Era of Middle Earth (after the events of the Lord of the Rings that was the end of the 3rd era.)

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Pixy ๐Ÿšซ

@Paladin_HGWT

I have had the pleasure of chatting with Mr. Weber several time

You missed a trick there by not substituting 'pleasure' with 'honour'....

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samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@Pixy

You missed a trick there by not substituting 'pleasure' with 'honour'....

Groan!

mauidreamer ๐Ÿšซ

@Paladin_HGWT

The anthologies and the Saganami Island books have tie-ins to the above books but are not essential to the plotlines.

Not exactly correct ...

While David fully intended the "SagIs" books to be focused on more junior RMN and GSN personnel, and the CoS, etc., books to focus on Cachet, Zilwicky and the Ballroom, he used the following two novels in each "line" to tie them very strongly into the primary anti-SLN and anti-MA activities while HH was fiddle-farting around Manticore, Beowulf and Earth ...

Skipping SftS, SoF and SoV (SAG) and ToF, CoG and TEiF (CoS) would leave huge gaps and confusion to the new readers.

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Paladin_HGWT ๐Ÿšซ

@mauidreamer

I agree that Mr. Weber connects all of his books in the "Honorverse" I am postulating that if a person were to stop reading those books, there are several points (books) that if you stopped reading then most readers would feel that there was sufficient closure to the story.

Mr. Weber is a clever writer; in that he concludes a storyline. Another storyline may sprout from that conclusion, without making the old storyline inconclusive. Mr. Weber is a good student of history; most historical events are influenced by prior events.

For example: The Battle of Appomattox Courthouse brought a conclusion to the American Civil War. The assassination of POTUS Lincoln is a new storyline that occurs after the war (although plotted before the end of the war). "Reconstruction" could not have occurred without the end of the war; the nature of Reconstruction was altered by the assassination of POTUS Lincoln. Both subsequent events have their own endings, yet they have influence on later events.

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PotomacBob ๐Ÿšซ

@Paladin_HGWT

The Battle of Appomattox Courthouse

Thank for spelling out the title instead of something like BOAC.

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Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@PotomacBob

A defunct British airline ending the Civil War would be a really weird time travel story.

samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@Radagast

A defunct British airline ending the Civil War would be a really weird time travel story.

Strictly speaking, they are not defunct; British Airways is their successor.

StarFleet Carl ๐Ÿšซ

@Radagast

A defunct British airline ending the Civil War would be a really weird time travel story.

BOAC Flight 777, shot down by Germans on June 1, 1943 in the Bay of Biscay, was never found. The plane skipped off the surface of the water, went back in time 80 years, crashing into the White House. Abraham Lincoln was entertaining his Secretary of War, William Stanton, and his Vice-President, Hannibal Hamlin, as well as Generals Hooker and Meade. They and their staffs were all killed in the resulting fire and building collapse.

When Lee began moving north on June 3 as he'd planned, towards Culpepper Court House, the Corps Commanders couldn't agree on what to do. The Union cavalry fell back in disarray instead of fighting at Brandy Station. Longstreet and Hill headed north along the mountains as planned, but when word reached them of the tumult in Washington, instead of heading west at Middleburg, Virginia, they headed east, with Ewell covering their northern flank while Meade's Army dithered near Frederick, and Hooker's Army headed north back to Washington, leaving Fredericksburg behind. On July 1, 1863, Lee's men found themselves overlooking Washington, and over the next two days of combat, managed to work their way through the defenses and the dispirited troops.

At that time in history, the US Presidential Succession was the Vice-President, and there was no clear plan for continuation of the government. The House and Senate had been busily meeting, fighting amongst themselves since the mysterious explosion that had taken out the civilian and military leadership, ignoring the warnings that Lee was closing on Washington until it was too late for them to evacuate. Some members tried to do so by sea, but once the Confederates seized some of the naval batteries, Confederate ironclads were able to blockade the Potomac. Members of Stuart's cavalry broke the rail line to Baltimore, trapping Congress.

With no way out, and to protect their own lives, even with overwhelming troop majorities, the US Congress surrendered to Robert E Lee on July 6th, 1863, ending the First American Civil War.

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Paladin_HGWT ๐Ÿšซ

@StarFleet Carl

Huzzah!

While I would lament such an end to the American Civil War.

Clever short story using the premise of "BOAC ending the Civil War."

Radagast ๐Ÿšซ

@StarFleet Carl

Much better than Turtledove.

Mushroom ๐Ÿšซ
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@StarFleet Carl

And since my momma told me if I can't say anything good about someone, don't say anything at all. David Fucking Flatcat Stealing Tribble Shitter Gerrold and the War against the Chtorr, that started when I was in HIGH SCHOOL, fifty LONG YEARS ago, and just left it HANGING with vague and completely empty PROMISES ...

Actually, it is more like 40 years (39). With 30 years since his last update.

But to be fair, he had many inspirations other than just Heinlein. But he was a huge inspiration with the Chtorran series. I have long considered it "Starship Troopers - but turned up to 11".

To be honest, I have pretty much figured all of that series out already. I am just wondering if I will ever find out if I am right in how I think it is going.

Grey Wolf ๐Ÿšซ

@StarFleet Carl

I think (could be wrong) that Michael Loucks has the record here. Roust and Tefler are competing for single-volume length (though Roust does have three 'books', but they're not separate).

I'm only just past 1.1 million words. That barely registers against some of the really long stories...

Keet ๐Ÿšซ
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@mrfriendly8181

On the advanced search page you can limit the scope of your search between KB sizes. That's a better metric than number of chapters because those can vary widely in length. I think you need premium to be able to use it.
That should produce a list within the size range you are looking for. You can try to split the list in manageable blocks by using some of the other parameters, for example a date or scores range.

ETA: I forgot about it but with a premium membership the category search page also offers the possibility to set a KB range. With the categories set that should get you exactly what you are looking for.

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AmigaClone ๐Ÿšซ

@Keet

That's a better metric than number of chapters because those can vary widely in length.

I have seen 'chapters' less than 1000 characters long on one extreme, around 592,000 characters long on the other one.

Almost inevitably, the chapters longer than 100,000 characters long could easily be split into two or more shorter ones.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@AmigaClone

Almost inevitably, the chapters longer than 100,000 characters long could easily be split into two or more shorter ones.

Not really. Chapters should relate to the content of what's in them and are of varying length, so they should not be cut arbitrarily. For example a book on the lives of the different US presidents should by one President = one chapter and some will be short while some will be long.

The closest to what you advocate would be if you use sub-chapters (which I often do) then you could make a cut by sub-chapters. Take the Presidential example above the chapter on Lincoln could be divided into 2 sub-chapters of his Pre-war life and his life in the civil war.

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AmigaClone ๐Ÿšซ
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@Ernest Bywater

AmigaClone

Almost inevitably, the chapters longer than 100,000 characters long could easily be split into two or more shorter ones.

Ernest Bywater

5/11/2022, 8:51:18 AM

Not really. Chapters should relate to the content of what's in them and are of varying length, so they should not be cut arbitrarily. For example a book on the lives of the different US presidents should by one President = one chapter and some will be short while some will be long.

The closest to what you advocate would be if you use sub-chapters (which I often do) then you could make a cut by sub-chapters. Take the Presidential example above the chapter on Lincoln could be divided into 2 sub-chapters of his Pre-war life and his life in the civil war.

No, what I am saying is that many of those 100,000 characters plus 'chapters' on SOL, especially on the upper limit, would be the equivalent of, to use your example of a book on the lives of US Presidents, the author listing several different presidents in the same 'chapter' - for example having one chapter going from Bush Jr to Trump.

awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@AmigaClone

Almost inevitably, the chapters longer than 100,000 characters long could easily be split into two or more shorter ones.

100,000 characters would be approaching 20,000 words. IMO that's far too long for a chapter in a novel.

AJ

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Dominions Son ๐Ÿšซ

@awnlee jawking

100,000 characters would be approaching 20,000 words. IMO that's far too long for a chapter in a novel.

That would depend on how long the novel is.

Sure, it's too long for a typical length novel, even in science fiction or high fantasy where novels have a higher average length than other genres.

On the other hand, if we are talking about a 500+KW epic, that's a different story.

For a 500KW epic with chapters at an avg length of 20KW would still give 25 chapters.

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awnlee jawking ๐Ÿšซ

@Dominions Son

That would depend on how long the novel is.

I disagree. If the reader has to break off halfway through a chapter eg for a meal, the chapter is too long.

Average reading speed is widely quoted as 250 words per minute. A 20,000 word chapter is asking a reader to commit to 80 minutes of uninterrupted attention.

AJ

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@mrfriendly8181

I like stories where the MC is betrayed, overcomes it, and finds love/moves on

Most of my stories are in the 50k to 80k words range, but I tend to focus on 'no sex' action stories. I've been cheated on in the past and don't like such stories, but the few times I do head in that direction with a 'sex' story they're like the story below with a lot of payback:

https://storiesonline.net/s/25317/debt-collection-revised

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mrfriendly8181 ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

I like to read the cheating/betrayal stories where the MC ends up with a better life because (having experienced betrayal) it proves that better things are out there. Even if it is a fictional take on a terribly real betrayal, it makes me feel better "experiencing" a good result coming from a bad thing.

itsmehonest ๐Ÿšซ
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@mrfriendly8181

Try stories written by qhml

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mrfriendly8181 ๐Ÿšซ

@itsmehonest

Thank you, I have read qhml and really enjoyed them. My favorite is easily "The Food Desert". I should see if I haven't read any stories.

Ernest Bywater ๐Ÿšซ

@mrfriendly8181

You may want to look at the 'Life in Paradise' stories by Douglas Fox, especially those with Kyle Martin as the main character. Starting with Finding Balance.

https://storiesonline.net/series/183/life-in-paradise

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mrfriendly8181 ๐Ÿšซ

@Ernest Bywater

Thank you EB, I will take a look at Douglas Fox's stories.

Tazzy81 ๐Ÿšซ

@mrfriendly8181

If sport related is a bonus then strap in coz this multi story saga is HUGE

http://storiesonline.net/s/75846/stupid-boy

Synopsis: Teenage boy growing up in the Midwest learns about relationships, sex and sports. Join this 'stupid boy' as the girls in his life guide him through the highs and lows as he tries to navigate freshman year of high school. Winner of the 2014 Clitorides Awards as the Best Erotic Story by a New Author / 2nd place Epic Erotic Story of the Year / Best Author / Best New Author
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Genre: Coming of Age
Codes: mt/ft, mt/Fa, Teenagers, School, Sports, Rags To Riches, First, Masturbation, Oral Sex, Safe Sex, Squirting, Slow
Size: 1814 KB | 362,894 Words | Votes: 5227 | Score: 8.69
Posted: 2014-02-08 Concluded: 2014-04-06

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