How about a story about a girl who develops super powers but they only work when she is completley naked.
She joins a teen titans style group of supers and laments her inability to have a 'secret identity' as her ass is visible in all the close up camera shots of them saving the world?
Not invisible. Naked.
In one of the movies they made a joke about her being naked when she became visible to the public. If memory serves it was when they where become aware of their new powers,
In one of the movies they made a joke about her being naked when she became visible to the public. If memory serves it was when they where become aware of their new powers,
Her FF uniform is made of a special material that becomes invisible with her (IIRC this is how it was in the comics too). Her regular clothes don't. She didn't have her special uniform at that point, so she had to strip to be completely invisible. If she'd thought about that at the end of the scene she could have stayed invisible until she had a chance to re-dress.
I'd think the OP would be looking for something where the nudity requirement isn't so easily defeated. The point is for every one to see that she's naked.
I'd go with something magic based, maybe magical tattoos with a limitation that they don't work when she covers them.
I could imagine a Wonder woman type as well. She was born half goddess (aphrodite) but her superpowers are only in full when she is fully naked. She could come to learn later that arousal makes her even stronger.
Empowered is a comic book about a young super heroine whose suit gives her powers, but it's so skintight she's almost naked, and it tends to get shredded a lot. There's plenty of T&A (well, not much actual nudity) but it's also a good story.
Yeah, I wish you hadn't mentioned it.
I'm now gradually working on getting caught up on YEARS worth of daily comics with sex and sort of nudity in them.
Dead-tree published or webcomics? Curious because I follow some webcomics that count (that I am years behind on).
I read them about the same way I read the long-running SOL serials: binge every couple of years, then wait.
webcomics
If Schlock's Mercenaries is one of the webcomics followed, have you run across Ringo's Troy Rising trilogy?
If Schlock's Mercenaries is one of the webcomics followed, have you run across Ringo's Troy Rising trilogy?
Maple Syrup Wars - gotta love it.
Alas, Howard Tayler finally pulled the plug on the daily webcomic. Granted, he did it for twenty years. The 'Comic Ironman' competition they did a few years ago was amusing, because 'Kevin & Kell' has been running daily since 1995.
That's not one of them, sorry. Too much out there, not enough time.
The ones I've followed the most are (in no particular order):
Questionable Content
Misfile
Okashina Okashi - Strange Candy
Girl Genius
A Girl And Her Fed
Flipside
Alice Grove
Some of those are complete, some I'm in various stages of 'behind' on, and some that's really way behind.
Girl Genius
A Girl And Her Fed
Definitely do both of those. What's funny is that the girls that Phil Foglio draws today still look like the ones he did back when he did Phil and Dixie for Dragon Magazine - and his adult comics, too. :)
How about her name is Eve and she has discovered her powers in the shower one day when her step-dad walks in on her.
Her mom explains that she too has these powers but has chosen not to use them.
The world needs heroes though and Eve is determined to save the world - even if it means flapping her tits and shaking her ass in public.
I'm writing, currently, another story connected to my Cut and Run superhero story (should be finished for Patreon on April 16th.) It's about how the main protagonist gets brought into the Teen Titans type group. The team is filthy with sex in much the same way you hear about athletes in Olympic villages: a high stress environment where young beautiful athletic people are sequestered and in need of release, support, and intimacy. No wonder Vancouver ran out of condoms.
As for your, she has to be naked for her powers to work girl, I've got Ivory. Ivory's not the focus of my story, she's one of the girls on the team. Powers like Marrow from X-Men (or Shikotsumyaku from Naruto). I don't think bone plates or strategically placed spikes, covering her tits and pussy while she fights totally fits in your bucket. But she can't cover up and use her powers as well as she can nakedly.
She doesn't actually occur in the first bit though, so I might not get her written until May...
On a similar related idea. I wrote up the first chapter a semi-apocryphal tale in this same superhero universe where the leading lady's little sister is forced into The Program during her senior year of high school. During which her latent "x-gene" sparks and because she's the daughter of a supervillain a whole host of suits, villains, and heroes try to snatch her up.
"I thought The Program was just sprang on people when they show up on Monday. Why are we getting the heads up the weekend before?" asked Louis, very nervously.
"Because some of you explode," Zeta said, drawing a severe look from Dr Wheeler.
"That's inelegant, though correct."
Zeta Super Naked in Super School...
Great title, sure, but I think I quit writing it straight after my best friend's bachelor party. One massive bad trips on mushrooms and I basically stopped any story with teenage characters. Why it took me years to get back to this world, even though that story was the only one with characters potentially under 18.
Remembered another example. One of the superpowered cops in Alan Moore's Top 10 was always naked and used her powers to basically paint herself to look clothed.
Shades of the Samantha K 'Dragon' stories. She does wear clothes a lot of the time, and none of her powers come from being naked per se, but she can and does make herself appear to wear clothes while naked fairly often.
but she can and does make herself appear to wear clothes while naked fairly often.
And that would not be what the OP is looking for.
Didn't say it did :) I was replying to @rkimmelerre4, whose example might not match the OP's idea either.
And I'll go on a bit. The idea is: superheroine whose powers work only when naked. Exploring the idea of 'naked but appearing clothed' is interesting. Do the powers work when she appears clothed but is actually naked? For someone with the power to control the appearance of her skin, that's potentially a huge 'out' from the original idea. The ability to appear clothed while naked is an interesting modification.
Similarly: what does 'clothed' actually mean? Naughty bits covered? What about socks? Gloves? Is total nudity required? If a bad guy tosses a sack over her head, is she now 'clothed' and without her powers? What if it's around a leg? An arm? If a banner blows loose in a fight and wraps around her, is she powerless?
On the opposite end, capes are rather minimal in terms of coverage. Can she wear one? How about a headband? A watch? How about a fishnet body stocking that doesn't actually cover much of anything?
If some of those things count, bad guys can be expected to carry around sacks and banner-launchers and anything else that might cause her to lose her powers. If they don't, she has an 'out'. Unless, of course, it's intention-based, and it's the intention to cover up that weakens her.
I vaguely remember a brother-sister superhero duo who, IIRC, got naked when they exercised their powers.
aubie56?
AJ
That sounds even better!
Perhaps he has to wear a cock cage and she has to wear a special chastity belt.
It behoves me to ask. When you wrote 'Naked Super Heroes', did you mean 'Nekkid Super Heroes'?
:-)
AJ
The Product Marketing Society has asked me to point out that creating a naked heroine with superpowers is a BAD idea. They cannot see any profit in what amounts to a naked doll. No outfits, no accessories. Heed this warning. Don't fuck with PMS.
The Cos-Play associations are similarly averse to the idea. Again, no opportunity for creating sexy outfits, not to mention the inevitable arrests for public nudity of those who dare to bare it all in imitation.
Likewise the Film and TV companies cannot envisage any way to include a naked heroine into any franchise or blockbuster film as the censors would demand an X certificate. The various smut film companies are already up to their tits in naked nymphos and need another naked girl like they need a hole in a condom.
Lastly there are the French. The inhabitants of the city of lights consider the idea in much the same way as those who procreate in their river. They consider it fucking in seine.
The citizens of Anchorage, AK think a naked super-heroine would be fucking cool. :)
Yup, and if she and a friend excitedly drove their snowmobile off a cliff...
Hypo Thermia & Louise.
Anchorage
Yesterday evening, in one of those unlikely coincidences that enrich our lives, I came across an old packet of seeds labelled 'sp Anchorage'.
I'm sure someone here will first read that as 'spankerage' but, being a gentleman, I won't name her.
I've put the seeds in water to soak. Only a couple have sunk, so I'm very unlikely to get any germination :-(
AJ
tenyari had a story called Naked Girl. It's been a while since I've read it, but as I recall, the title character's powers actively destroyed any clothing she was wearing when she used them.
From her site:
"Synopsis: An ongoing series about a Naked Super Heroine from the ghetto's of inner city California. Not Parody, but serious Graphic Novel style Supers.
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Story codes for this story should actually be: F, nosex, solo, exhib, voy, Super, naked Since the character is heterosexual, I used MF.
Sex Contents: No Sex
Genre:
Codes: Ma/Fa, Magic, Fiction, Masturbation, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism, Violent
Size: 80 KB | 15,264 Words | Votes: - | Score: -
Posted: 2002-08-12
Incomplete AND Inactive
Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3"
When I asked for her story scores in order, this story was her highest rated one. The one below it was 7.84.
This is a separate post so that Management can delete it because it mentions ASSTR. Tenyari's site there has a tentative fourth chapter posted, but back in 2002. She planned for at least two more chapters after that, but life happens and there is no indication the story was completed anywhere.
I really like the character Atom Eve from invincible.
I would take a shot at writing this story But I'm not sure I am cut out for the genre.
I could picture her stepdad walking in on her while she is taking a shower. Her powers emerged and she zaps him out of the shower. When she gets out she tries it again but she is wearing clothes. She slowly becomes aware that the only time the power works is when she is completely naked.
I do like the added twist of her coming from the ghetto though.
If someone were willing to work with me and mentor me on where the story could go, I'd be willing to put in some of the work I'd create a character that's similar to Atom
Eve because I don't want to deal with having purists that follow the story telling me that that's not her origin
I'm surprised no one's mentioned Dragon Cobalt's The Naked Warrior. Admittedly it's psychic powers, not super powers, that are dampened by clothing, but those are effectively the same thing for story purposes.
I may not be cut out for this but here is my crack at a little snippet of an origin story. What do you think? would you read a story based on her?
PREAMBLE:
Welcome to an Alternate Earth. It is not much different than our own. Many of the same places and people exist on other worlds. There is one notable exception between our world and this Earth in the Visage Universe. It is a world populated by Super-humans – some are heroes, some are villains and some are a bit of both. This Earth is in the Visage universe – not quite a mirror but a reasonable facsimile to our own world.
Though many of the super-humans of the Visage Universe began long ago, the first notable appearance of super-humans to the public eye first occurred during the Second World War, where heroes battled the Axis forces, as well as spies and fifth columnists within America.
Approximately twenty years before this story begins an advanced starfaring race of conquerors known as the Krellan Stellar Imperium invaded and occupied Earth. It took a combination of the Earth's Super Heroes working with "The Contingency" (Alien Rebels from within the KSI) to end their domination of Earth and send them packing after a brutal occupation.
No one knows if the KSI will return one day to finish what they started.
CHAPTER ONE
CHERRY'S STORY: West Garfield park, Chicago, May 4th, 2018.
"Girl, you are thicker than a snicker," I can still remember the day my step-dad said those fateful words to me and how angry it made me.
My name is Courtney Leroy. I am or at least was a typical teenage girl in my Senior Year at Reginald Vel Johnson High School. I never knew my biological father. My mother tells me he died during the Krellan occupation as a hero of the resistance but that his existence is classified. I was raised along with my brother Billy by my mother Barb and my grandmother.
A few years ago, my mom met Carl. I don't know what she saw in that pot-bellied, loser but she moved in with him. They were going to get married but Carl keeps stalling. He claims they are married in their mind and my mom refers to him as my "Step Dad".
I am not in any rush to see my mom tie the knot with the jerk. He is brash and perpetually unemployed. If my mother didn't work we would have no income at all and be homeless.
When my Grandmother passed away we had to move away from a relatively safe suburb of Chicago. The only place we could afford was a grungy apartment in one of the worst Ghettos of Chicago. I share a room with my dorky brother Billy. He is a sophomore and short for his age. Billy wears his chestnut hair feathered as a throw-back to the 1980s.
If he had one superpower it is being invisible to girls.
Billy is lucky that he wasn't born a ginger like me. I was an ugly baby covered in freckles. I was a string bean of knees and elbows before puberty. I must have secretly won the genetic lottery though because once puberty hit I sprouted 36 DD boobs and most of freckles went away. I am frequently told I look like a cross between Lindsay Lohan and Emma Stone. My long red hair got lighter, and everyone comments on my green eyes.
Especially my gross "Step-Dad" Carl. He is a total pervert. He loves to make comments about how my body is too small for my boobs or that my butt is finally catching up to the size of my tits. It started with awkward staring and progressed to "accidentally" touching my butt or brushing up against me. My mother doesn't condone it. She simply ignores it or calls it harmless teasing.
I don't mind as much when Billy teases me. I give him as much as he dishes out, but Carl just creeps me out.
I suppose my life changed one day thanks in part to Carl. I wouldn't thank him for my powers but they first emerged the day he "accidentally" walked into the bathroom while I was taking a shower. I was singing along to Ariane Grande and almost didn't notice him.
The walls of our crappy apartment are paper thin and even if he hadn't heard the shower running he knew someone was behind the curtain when he opened the door. I can still hear him smugly laughing "Girl, you are thicker than a snicker."
I immediately saw red when I saw the outline of his body behind the shower curtain standing there. Carl is balding but he is hairy every place else on his body. His Chicago accent is very thick and everything he says sounds like it was intended to be offensive or sexual. He was wearing his dirty wife beater tank top and sweat pants like he always does.
I remember the look of delight on his face when I first pulled the shower curtain open. He had this look of surprised delight because he was suddenly staring at my twin bazookas (as he called them) soaking wet and pointed right at him. He commented on how pokey my nipples were like he was entitled to judge my body.
I have huge, nubby strawberry-colored nipples and they were pointy and hard because our hot water is non-existent so the water was ice cold. I took a mental snapshot of the image of his grinning face at that moment that I'll never forget as long as I live. I even regretted for an instant exposing myself to him so I could confront him about peeping on me.
I had to share a room with my little brother because we could only afford a cockroach infested two-bedroom apartment. Even Billy knows to give me my privacy when I am changing and had never peeped on me (to my knowledge) when I changed. Who was this creep to look upon my nudity?
I did not consider myself a violent person. I was lucky enough to still go to my old high school in the suburbs where fights weren't a daily occurrence. I was so angry that I just wanted to slam the smirk off his perverted face.
That is exactly what I did. I did NOT expect to see Carl slam up against the wall and break the drywall. I didn't think it would really hurt him. My step-dad collapsed into a hole he just created in the wall. I stalked out of the shower after him. Carl's jaw was dislocated and he looked at me like the helpless worm that he really is.
Water was still dripping off my naked body as I picked him up by the scruff of his tank top. It shredded and the fat fuck fell to the ground without a shirt. "You have bigger tits than I do, Carl!"
"What the fuck? How did you do that? Leave, leave me alone!" Carl stuttered. My stepdad was a sadistic bully and a creep but right now he was pissing his dirty sweat pants over what I'd do to him next. I simply pointed a finger at the door and he raced out.
I took my time drying off, putting on underarm deodorant, applying my make up and getting dressed. My mom looked at me like I was a monster when I opened the bathroom door. She had heard Carl's side of the story and he made it sound like I attacked him for no reason.
"Why did you do that for, Courtney? We are going to lose our deposit on this place!" she was hugging and consoling Carl at the kitchen table. Carl was acting like a helpless baby and holding his broken jaw. He looked at me with terror in his eyes.
Billy could barely suppress a giggle. He didn't like Carl any more than I did. Carl frequently teased him for being shorter than everyone else his age and constantly berated him for a difference of opinion on sports.
"He was watching me shower, Mom!" I insisted as I put my hands on my hips angrily.
"Barb, that isn't what happened at all. I went into the bathroom to get some tampons for you like you asked. I was only in there for a second and I announced myself before I came in. She told me it was alright if it was only for a second," Carl's lies were unbelievable to anyone but my mother.
Mom took his side over mine! I was so angry.
"She must be on crack cocaine, Barb! Crystal meth, Roofies, something! You should have seen her toss me around like a rag doll!" Carl sounded like a frightened weasel.
"Roofies don't give you super strength. I would think you of all people would KNOW that Carl!" I was still grappling with understanding what I had just done. It was some feat of super strength to toss him around like a doll. I meant to pick up a chair to threaten him with it but my super strength had faded as quickly as it had appeared.
My mother grounded me for what happened. Billy joined me in our bedroom before dinner. "That was freaking awesome. I wish I could have seen it."
"Yeah, well I am glad you didn't because I was butt ass naked and soaking wet," I quipped wryly.
Billy didn't offer a wry comment back. I knew he looked at porn A LOT. I knew he had perverted thoughts but I assumed he didn't look at me that way. He asked me what had happened and I told him exactly what I just told you.
"Super strength? Maybe you are getting super powers like Dad?" he theorized. He believed beyond a shadow of a doubt that our biological father was a super hero. It helped make sense of losing someone so important to us that he had never met. I was too young to know who our father was. I once believed he was a super hero as well. I had given up on theorizing about dead heroes when Carl entered our lives.
The world was populated with super-heroes and villains but they don't intervene in the private lives of normal teenagers like me. I never thought about what I wanted to be when I grew up. I assumed I'd find a comfortable but unrewarding job as a paralegal or in the medical field. It would pay the bills and keep the lights on in an otherwise unremarkable life. I didn't expect to be the kind of person anyone would write a story about.
Billy on the other hand dreamt of one day being a super-hero like our father. He wasn't entirely altruistic about it. He wanted the power to kick the asses of his bullies and the fame and prestige that went along with it. Frankly, Billy wanted girls to fawn all over him!
"I think I was just REALLY pissed off," I shrugged.
"Sis, I saw the damage you did in the bathroom. That isn't just pissed off. That's wrecking ball level. You totaled the bathroom."
"I am taking your step-father to the Hospital. He has asked that you not come with us because he is afraid of you. There are microwave dinners in the freezer if you get hungry," My mom opened the bedroom door and announced coldly.
I rolled my eyes. I wanted to pick up the bed and throw it at her for being so stupid and taking Carl's side over mine. My mom was very loving and meant well but she couldn't see Carl's MANY obvious imperfections the way the entire rest of the world did.
"We should recreate the situation and see if you can do it again," Billy suggested enthusiastically once Carl and my mom left in an Uber.
"I am not going to get naked in the shower and let you watch," I didn't think Billy was serious when I first protested.
"Fine, wear panties in the shower or something and I'll walk in," Billy was insistent.
"I am not going to wear panties into a shower, and I don't want to toss you around the bathroom," I was more insistent this time now that I knew Billy was actually serious about conducting the experiment.
"Don't toss me around. Just grab something and see if you can lift it."
"Fine, but don't walk into the bathroom. I'll take another shower and see what happens," I picked up one of his fifteen pound dumbells. Billy was a little chubby and had chipmunk cheeks. He fancied his twin dumb-bells to be his "work out" equipment. They were a little heavy to me but I brought one into the shower and closed the door.
It felt silly to strip off and take another shower after I had already taken one only an hour earlier. I have to admit I was curious and wanted to believe I had emerging super-powers. A part of me was doing it to dispel any doubt that I really DID NOT have powers. I assumed I was the quintessential typical teenager and I didn't want the hubris of believing I was destined to be special only to have the let down of finding out I was quite ordinary.
I undressed and turned on the water. I recreated the exact circumstances prior to Carl's intrusion. The weight felt lighter in my hand but I didn't have super strength. I was quite relieved and felt a little silly for letting Billy talk me into this experiment.
I suppose I had to know for sure.
Despite my insistence that Billy NOT open the bathroom door, he did it anyway. "SURPRISE!!" he yelled as he flung the door open.
My gut reaction was to fling his dumbbell at him. I launched it through the hallway and into the apartment next door like a bullet.
Billy's face was a mixture of surprise and panic because the projectile weight had narrowly missed his head by a few inches. I could have killed him! I poked my head out of the shower.
"Mom is going to kill me!" were my first words.
This is a rough draft of a rough draft. If anyone wants to run with it, I am all in favor.
Update..
I managed to make it about six chapters. Definitely did a good origin story that I'm happy with.
The problem is that I don't know how to write action sequences and fight scenes very well. I can see it all in my head like a comic book. However when I start writing it out it seems repetitive. I want to paint a picture with my words and I'm not very good at writing superhero action. Would anyone be interested in becoming a mentor or working on this as a partnership?
I think there's at least six chapters left but to make it worthwhile, there needs to be more polish on the thrilling adventure and fight sequences