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Evolutionist, by Fick Suck, 2008

PotomacBob 🚫

My intent is to read Evolutionist, by Fick Suck, copyright 2008. There are a couple of reviews that give the story relatively good scores.
My question concerns something not covered by the reviews: the use of news articles to tell significant portions of the story. Evolutionist is 3rd person.
What if the story were told in 1st person? Would the use of news articles, political speeches, personal letters, sermons, lectures, transcripts, etc., be a legitimate way to weave other viewpoints into the story and thereby broaden it away from the constant use of "I"?

Replies:   Finbar_Saunders  REP
Finbar_Saunders 🚫

@PotomacBob

Um, yes I am sure that would be a structure that would be possible.

I am not sure if you've read the story, but I was pleasantly surprised by how enjoyable it was.

REP 🚫

@PotomacBob

Would the use of news articles, political speeches, personal letters, sermons, lectures, transcripts, etc., be a legitimate way to weave other viewpoints into the story and thereby broaden it away from the constant use of "I"?

Yes. Your MC could describe what they saw, read, and heard.

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