I noticed this story on the Rising Stars list:
Tales From Mist World has some great storytelling, and I intend to read it through to the end, but I must say one thing: Reading this story like driving your family car through some beautiful scenery on a road full of potholes, speed bumps and washouts. You want to enjoy the view, but the condition of the road makes it difficult. I implore the author; PLEASE, please, please... get a proofreader, correct the hundreds of homonym/homophone mistakes and punctuation mistakes and omissions. Fix the occasional scrambled, completely fubar sentences, and repost a corrected version.
I doubt the author will do this as the story in it's current form is scoring in the mid-8's. It makes me wonder if those reading stories like this just don't care about the errors, or if their level of education just does not recognize them as errors.